Well… raise your hand if you DIDN'T see anything like this coming…! . Anyone…? Anyone…? . And there's Plymayer's avatar poking his head in again…! . Thanks for reading everyone!
Oh man, i'm scared...Did the big boy finally break out of his chains? Omg, I was right in my prediction if he did? How the heck did Jack not see it coming x.x? Lol!!
"BUT THE WORLD IS FULL OF ZANIES AND FOOLS,
WHO DON'T BELIEVE IN SENSIBLE RULES,
AND WONT BELIEVE WHAT SENSIBLE PEOPLE SAY,
AND BECAUSE THESE DAFT AND DEWY-EYED DOPES KEEP BUILDING UP IMPOSSIBLE HOPES,
IMPOSSIBLE, THINGS ARE HAPPENING EVERY DAY"
Squid? Does this mean he has tentacles now? Or has he gone all squishy like Tetsuo did in Akira? Mutating like that puts a great strain on the body and maybe he won't be able to keep it together. Great exterior shot, and why do I think that water tower is coming down? Think I've been watching too many action films.
@Banes: *smiles* I suspected this was suspected...! hehe... I still tried to make it suspenseful, but I suspect there'll still be a bit of surprise when the suspect is revealed...!
@Banes:Thank You! Yeah, I'm trying to keep a 3D-image in my head of the layout of this area, the halls, and glass dividers - a viewer who looks for such things will note some inconsistencies but I think I got the general thing down pretty well...! Yeah, we'll 'hear' Biggs but could be a bit longer before we 'see' him again!
...once again, I love that you're making us wait. That's the real joy of suspense...the actual suspense. I'd be okay if you didn't show us Eli for another five pages!
skyangel at 2:31AM, March 7, 2015
Omg Eli!!! *raises hand*. I was so busy trying to see the wood that I never noticed I was standing behind a tree!
KimLuster at 9:32AM, March 5, 2015
@Ghosty: yeah, like watching toddlers trying to eat spaghetti :)
ghostrunner at 8:47AM, March 5, 2015
like fighting a handful of noodles
KimLuster at 4:21AM, March 5, 2015
@Peipei: We'll find out Kimber Lee's reaction soon - as in next page ;)
Peipei at 1:25AM, March 5, 2015
At least Kimber has super sharp hearing, she can tell everyone of the news that big boy broke out :s.
Peipei at 1:24AM, March 5, 2015
Oh man, i'm scared...Did the big boy finally break out of his chains? Omg, I was right in my prediction if he did? How the heck did Jack not see it coming x.x? Lol!!
KimLuster at 5:00AM, March 4, 2015
@tupapayon: so appropriate !!
tupapayon at 3:38AM, March 4, 2015
"BUT THE WORLD IS FULL OF ZANIES AND FOOLS, WHO DON'T BELIEVE IN SENSIBLE RULES, AND WONT BELIEVE WHAT SENSIBLE PEOPLE SAY, AND BECAUSE THESE DAFT AND DEWY-EYED DOPES KEEP BUILDING UP IMPOSSIBLE HOPES, IMPOSSIBLE, THINGS ARE HAPPENING EVERY DAY"
KimLuster at 5:18PM, March 3, 2015
Thanks Corntown
CornTown at 3:50PM, March 3, 2015
Nice landscape
KimLuster at 1:46PM, March 3, 2015
@tupapayon: and turn off your cellphone... ;)
tupapayon at 12:23PM, March 3, 2015
The long expected moment is coming… gotta get me some popcorn…
KimLuster at 10:56AM, March 3, 2015
@Call me Tom: You shoulda been on the Dream Team!
Call Me Tom at 10:49AM, March 3, 2015
Its Impossible for Eli to escape, just like its impossible for there to be alien dream virus that makes people into super humans after they die!...
KimLuster at 9:33AM, March 3, 2015
@skreem: 7...?! Yayyyy!!
Froggtreecomics at 9:22AM, March 3, 2015
7
KimLuster at 8:57AM, March 3, 2015
@Bravo: What actually happened in that vault will be explained a bit more next page - and I swear you're stealing my story idea notes...!! ;)
bravo1102 at 8:25AM, March 3, 2015
Okay call off the UH-60 Blackhawks and call up the AH-64 Apaches.
bravo1102 at 8:24AM, March 3, 2015
Squid? Does this mean he has tentacles now? Or has he gone all squishy like Tetsuo did in Akira? Mutating like that puts a great strain on the body and maybe he won't be able to keep it together. Great exterior shot, and why do I think that water tower is coming down? Think I've been watching too many action films.
KimLuster at 7:34AM, March 3, 2015
@Whirlwynd: Thanks! :D
Whirlwynd at 7:33AM, March 3, 2015
Really nice exterior shot! =D
Banes at 7:00AM, March 3, 2015
It's like that Alfred Hitchcock distinction between surprise and suspense: Surprises are fun, but suspense is even betta!
KimLuster at 6:52AM, March 3, 2015
@Banes: *smiles* I suspected this was suspected...! hehe... I still tried to make it suspenseful, but I suspect there'll still be a bit of surprise when the suspect is revealed...!
KimLuster at 6:48AM, March 3, 2015
@Banes:Thank You! Yeah, I'm trying to keep a 3D-image in my head of the layout of this area, the halls, and glass dividers - a viewer who looks for such things will note some inconsistencies but I think I got the general thing down pretty well...! Yeah, we'll 'hear' Biggs but could be a bit longer before we 'see' him again!
Banes at 6:45AM, March 3, 2015
...once again, I love that you're making us wait. That's the real joy of suspense...the actual suspense. I'd be okay if you didn't show us Eli for another five pages!