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KimLuster on May 25, 2015
First panel I figured Kimber Lee would have to bust thru some glass panels as she worked her way thru building - she probably should've closed her eyes… 4th panel perspective is off - Kimber Lee is way too big even when she's supposed to just look closer… Oh well…
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Story-wise I've slowed down but I'm not stopping - hope you all stick around…
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Thanks for reading everyone!
KimLuster at 11:27AM, May 29, 2015
@Paul: And I can't say enough how good it is to see you back. You're the second to comment on my comic and it just doesn't feel the same when you're off on 'vacation' ;)
KimLuster at 11:25AM, May 29, 2015
@Skyangel: Thank You! I kept trying to find ways to speed things up... nothing worked... so I'm just gonna accept that things will be slower... maybe I'll just get faster by osmosis :D
PaulEberhardt at 10:02AM, May 29, 2015
Being more or less all-powerful doesn't mean you can't be nice. ;) I had a veritable reading binge this afternoon and I'm lost for words about how much I enjoyed it. It's really damn'd good to be back, especially because I know I'll be able to drop in more often again.
skyangel at 9:58AM, May 29, 2015
I'd say 'yes' because I've seen how bad she can be when she gets mad but the docs holding back with that final word so I have a horrible feeling he's going to finish off with 'take the bitch down, now!' I missed an update so imagine my surprise when I caught up today to be faced with two glorious pages of full colour art again. The tonal effect was nice but this just reminds me how vivid and exciting the action suddenly looks in full colour again. The extra time you are taking on the pages definitely shows. The first panel is especially wonderful but the whole page is alive and kicking which for an action scene is just perfect.
KimLuster at 3:05PM, May 28, 2015
@Banes: Why thank you...! I'm sure Kimber Lee will try to explain if they give her a chance...!
Banes at 12:35PM, May 28, 2015
Wow! Brilliant, bright colors here! Very appealing! Hmm...this makes me a little nervous...how can Kim be so sure she won't infect her family? But there's no denying her wishes at this point, eh Doc? I really love the first and fifth panels in particular
KimLuster at 10:49AM, May 28, 2015
@Barry: Thanks I'll try that mirror trick... - hehe everybody keeps talking about this photoshop thing and how it would make my life so much easier... :D
BarryCorbett at 8:58AM, May 28, 2015
Nice page, Kim! It helps me to spot distortions by holding my artwork up to a mirror. Once you've been staring at it for a while, everything looks normal. That's where Photoshop comes in handy. You can flip the whole image, and then Just shrink her character down. But, Sway is right. You're being to hard on yourself. I love the two finger pounce in panel 2.
KimLuster at 4:05AM, May 27, 2015
@Peipei: hehe well... maybe she'll s'plain herself soon...!
Peipei at 11:06PM, May 26, 2015
Lol! I'm sure Kimber knows what she's doing, but if I were that doctor, I would need a little more than her asking kindly. But how can she even prove that she's no longer contagious?
KimLuster at 5:57PM, May 26, 2015
@Whirlwynd: Thank You - it was surprisingly fun to do!
Whirlwynd at 4:55PM, May 26, 2015
Love the flying glass in that first panel =D
KimLuster at 11:05AM, May 26, 2015
@FC: Thanks! :D
KimLuster at 11:05AM, May 26, 2015
@ghost: hehe it comes in handy!
fallopiancrusader at 9:49AM, May 26, 2015
I'm really digging the bright and simple color washes.
ghostrunner at 9:01AM, May 26, 2015
shes dexterious
KimLuster at 4:06AM, May 26, 2015
@Bravo: Hmmmm... you're right on all accounts (Showers and Perspective Point Outs). If I fail to get the perspective right at least I'll stop pointing it out :D
KimLuster at 4:05AM, May 26, 2015
@Vinomas: Thank You!
KimLuster at 4:04AM, May 26, 2015
@plymayer: Ha very true...!
KimLuster at 4:04AM, May 26, 2015
@Strix: Thanks - hopefully you won't wait too long...
KimLuster at 4:03AM, May 26, 2015
@Tupapayon: She's learning... ;)
bravo1102 at 3:41AM, May 26, 2015
There is such a thing as forced perspective where the point of view skews everything and it isn't as it would be in reality. Think of how it would look through a camera lens when you frame the shot. Where do you want everything? How best is it to force your vision of the action onto the audience? Panel four needs to be tightened with the banister closer and larger to Kimber Lee's butt or if kept where it is the arc show flow over it and the panel trimmed .
bravo1102 at 3:41AM, May 26, 2015
You know Kimber Lee you look like hell, maybe a shower and some band-aids and you can talk to your family. Running in there all bloody would probably freak them out right now. And you do realize that most readers won't notice a technical mistake unless it is pointed out to them? I looked at it after you said something. I noticed the "error" and then I realized that when first seeing it I had made a fix subconsciously to cover the error in my head. (I imagined the banister in the foreground larger and closer to Kimber Lee's bottom)
VinoMas at 12:46AM, May 26, 2015
love the bright colors!
plymayer at 8:45PM, May 25, 2015
She's lucky no has just mopped those stairs, they would be slippery.