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KimLuster on April 25, 2016
One more page left in chapter - next page (last in Ch.) will likely be late (maybe by several days) because 1) I'm going to the coast for 3 days over the weekend, and 2) I gotta work on my page for Genejoke's most recent comic jam!!
3rd Panel - sometimes you should rotate the page you're working with a bit so you're looking at a figure more upright - I got the limbs wrong!! Oh well - Badonk!!!
Line work is a little rougher too; I rushed some of it. Although I've made tremendous progress (I feel) sense I started this, it feels like I've hit a bit of a brick wall lately (when it comes to getting mo' better). Not burnout I'm feeling - just a little frustration, nothing serious!!
Maybe I'm just not sleeping enough (go to the Pics Forum for a hilarious pic of me all wired up to find out why that might be…)
Fine! Enough griping!! Thanks for Reading Everyone!! Truly! Thanks!
KimLuster at 7:57PM, May 2, 2016
@Whirly: :D
Whirlwynd at 2:29PM, May 2, 2016
Get her Kimber Lee
KimLuster at 5:21AM, April 30, 2016
@z74: ain't it the truth! Thanks a bunch!!
Z74 at 11:53PM, April 29, 2016
sorry to hear you have insomnia issues - me too - sometimes I don't sleep for two or three days and when i do I'm out for 13 or so hours, makes life rough when you haven't slept for 20 hours and have to go to work for a 12 hr. shift ! Don't be hard on yourself, the page looks good to me. :)
KimLuster at 8:02PM, April 29, 2016
@ashtree: Hehe yeah all that confidence Socorro had - where did it go?;) Thanks!!
ashtree house at 3:51PM, April 29, 2016
Back pedalling now!! And I agree with Skyangel, the poses and battle scenes are amazing.. panel 3 and 4!! Awesome action!
KimLuster at 4:45AM, April 29, 2016
@skyangel: Thank You!! Yeah I complain too much haha!! I just want to be able to draw strange poses with perfect anatomy in just a few minutes, while sipping on a margarita!! Is that too much to ask?!! :D Lollopy...!! I'll have to remember that word!!
KimLuster at 4:41AM, April 29, 2016
@Peipei: I think you'll like the next page!! :D
skyangel at 1:30AM, April 29, 2016
I always love how well you depict the fight scenes and your anatomy always looks fine to me although now you've drawn my attention to panel 3 you forced me to think about an arm that looked perfectly fine before! I never feel totally happy with my art either. Every time I turn out a page I feel proud of, I tend to look back again in a months time and think meh! But we do all definitely improve in a lollopy sort of way.
Peipei at 4:38PM, April 28, 2016
I admit I chuckled a little at the "Badonk" panel, considering she landed pretty hard on her badonkadonk like that xD! And I don't think Socorro can expect to be forgiven and or trusted right away! She's done a lot to break that trust down between she and Kimber.
KimLuster at 1:43PM, April 28, 2016
@Jerrie: :)... And what should be the finishing move...?!!
jerrie at 11:36AM, April 28, 2016
Screw her apology....finish her!
KimLuster at 10:00AM, April 28, 2016
@El cid: haha perfect description of that panel! It's the shoulder joints and that back leg... if I'd rotated 90° counter clockwise when drawing I would've had a better handle on it maybe.... :)
El Cid at 8:11AM, April 28, 2016
Wow, put her in her place! I can see where some of the limbs look a bit off... in the third panel, it looks like Soc is walking upward a la Adam West in that so-bad-it's-awesome Batman movie. Panel four is great though (ow! there goes her coccyx!)
KimLuster at 4:17AM, April 28, 2016
@plymayer: Kimber Lee's response, coming soon!! (though likely a little late due to a couple other obligations...)
KimLuster at 4:15AM, April 28, 2016
@jgib99: Well I thought about including another smaller panel where she slump the ground after hitting the rock wall, accompanied by a small '...kadonk'!!
plymayer at 11:28PM, April 27, 2016
DON'T FALL FOR IT. This where she goes "Oh it's okay I'll for-" and gets sand in the face! Or worse and the fighting continues.
jgib99 at 10:44PM, April 27, 2016
Considering that Socorro was thrown rather violently, panel 3 works IMO. I just have to know, if Socorro would've bounced a couple of times after being thrown, would the sound effect have been "Badonkadonk"?
KimLuster at 6:19PM, April 27, 2016
@Paul: She's so humble she's proud of it!!
KimLuster at 6:19PM, April 27, 2016
@Banes: Thanks so much! Despite all the back and forth, I hope it does feel like we're going somewhere...!! We are - we really are!!
KimLuster at 6:18PM, April 27, 2016
@ghosty: what if they just smell you but don't see you!! :D
KimLuster at 6:17PM, April 27, 2016
@tupapayon: Always look forward to your quotes and links!!
KimLuster at 6:16PM, April 27, 2016
@Bravo: Well... Okay! Cool!!
PaulEberhardt at 10:12AM, April 27, 2016
Taught her some humility... NOT ;)
Banes at 8:36AM, April 27, 2016
oh...just read the earlier comments. You were talkin about a different panel. Enh, no biggie! Ain't nobody's perfect, as my brain surgeon used to say!