The last job.
Gray Seraphim on Aug. 1, 2009
His name is Fen, short for Fenrir. He'll have to introduce himself later, but keep it hush hush that you know his name.
A few things. A buddy of mine told me to write in all caps, lemme know if it makes a difference. I'm not used to writing in print. I love my Spalding cursive. Um, oh yeah, in the last panel, he is holding something, but that'll be a secret for now ;)
Skykittykat at 12:13AM, Aug. 7, 2009
Gray this is excellent, all caps definitely helps a ton.
that kid yellow at 11:45AM, Aug. 6, 2009
This looks really good. Lol that dude pretty mean
Dragonizer at 7:10PM, Aug. 2, 2009
He is very rude, isn't he? :P Yeah, the all caps thing is working nicely. However, it's really hard to read the smaller text, especially in panel two.
Dave7 at 1:09AM, Aug. 2, 2009
Heck of a lot of action for only two pages in (in a good way, I mean). I definitely want to see where this goes. And yeah, all caps usually does tend to be easier to read if you're handwriting everything.