1. Your recolors are shit. Wait, let me rephrase that. They are the sort of things that aspire to be like shit. They have absolutely ZERO shading, and use really bright colors. It is an offense to shit to put it with those.
2. Your text... WHY?!?! You need to have a text BUBBLE! Color coded font doesn't work right to begin with, and refusing to use a bubble just makes it EVEN MORE unreadable. [color=red]Imagine[/color] [color=cyan]reading[/color] [color=violet]a[/color] [color=green]book[/color] [color=brown]and[/color] [color=orange]all[/color] [color=blue]the[/color] [color=yellow]words[/color] or [color=red]sentences[/color] [color=indigo]being[/color] [color=green]different[/color] [color=violet]colors...[/color]
That's a little awkward to read, ain't it?
3. What's with all the white area? You aren't supposed to credit those people! They didn't make the sprites. As far as I'm concerned, crediting someone for someone else's work is straight up theivery.
4. Bit MIXXAGE 2 THA XTREME! That DBZ guy, he does NOT look right next to those unshaded sonic recolors.
This is some pretty hardcore suck, heres some bullet points:
-Your recolours are so bad I can't accuratley describe them without using the term "utter shit", this also applies to the ones in your recent update.
-No text boxes? that just dosen't work, get some text boxes.
-Colour coded text, Don't use it, it's crap, and it incorrectly indicates tone and it is completley pointless.
-Bigass white space thing with credits. what the crap? it's hideous, lose it.
Also on crediting: YOU DO NOT HAVE TO CREDIT THE SOURCE OF YOUR SPRITES IF THEY ARE DIRECTLY RIPPED FROM A GAME, someone who ripped sprites didn't make them, in fact they engaged in the criminal act of ripping them from games, the only person you should credit is the origional maker of the sprites, IE the company that made the game.
Word bubbles help a lot. Also color coded text is not needed.
Also you suffer from bit mixing really really bad.
Really, I can't make too much out of this comic due to the fact half the text is completely unreadable.
I can't read much of it
I am here to help (i use Paint)
Ok 1st click on the rectangle ( i used them since i am a beginner like you) also you don't need to use rectangles (to use click on rectangle and 3 lines thing will appear under the item bar click on the middle one so paste the writing on then use the square over it and paste the writing in the square
2 words text tails use the polygon shape thing and click on it and again there will be 3 lines make a text bubble tail with it and then you have done text bubbles
Cyan recolors hurt my eyes. Worse when they're not shaded. Improve speech bubbles... well, add speech bubbles. And work on your grammar. I can't really read some of the text for the last 2 reasons.
Needs text bubbles
Recolors need to be shaded.
Also if your not gonna' use the shift key just make it a smaller text and press the cap locks key like real comic makers do.
D0ct0rman at 6:49PM, Jan. 15, 2007
Wow this really sucks...
Jak0070 at 6:14PM, Sept. 24, 2006
it did rich
Rich at 6:23PM, Sept. 15, 2006
I think my colored sentence speaks louder than anything else I could have said.
Mimarin at 5:45PM, Sept. 15, 2006
Oh yeah I forgot to mention the terrible bit mixing, I also forgot your 1.
Rich at 5:35PM, Sept. 15, 2006
1. Your recolors are shit. Wait, let me rephrase that. They are the sort of things that aspire to be like shit. They have absolutely ZERO shading, and use really bright colors. It is an offense to shit to put it with those. 2. Your text... WHY?!?! You need to have a text BUBBLE! Color coded font doesn't work right to begin with, and refusing to use a bubble just makes it EVEN MORE unreadable. [color=red]Imagine[/color] [color=cyan]reading[/color] [color=violet]a[/color] [color=green]book[/color] [color=brown]and[/color] [color=orange]all[/color] [color=blue]the[/color] [color=yellow]words[/color] or [color=red]sentences[/color] [color=indigo]being[/color] [color=green]different[/color] [color=violet]colors...[/color] That's a little awkward to read, ain't it? 3. What's with all the white area? You aren't supposed to credit those people! They didn't make the sprites. As far as I'm concerned, crediting someone for someone else's work is straight up theivery. 4. Bit MIXXAGE 2 THA XTREME! That DBZ guy, he does NOT look right next to those unshaded sonic recolors.
Mimarin at 5:11PM, Sept. 15, 2006
This is some pretty hardcore suck, heres some bullet points: -Your recolours are so bad I can't accuratley describe them without using the term "utter shit", this also applies to the ones in your recent update. -No text boxes? that just dosen't work, get some text boxes. -Colour coded text, Don't use it, it's crap, and it incorrectly indicates tone and it is completley pointless. -Bigass white space thing with credits. what the crap? it's hideous, lose it. Also on crediting: YOU DO NOT HAVE TO CREDIT THE SOURCE OF YOUR SPRITES IF THEY ARE DIRECTLY RIPPED FROM A GAME, someone who ripped sprites didn't make them, in fact they engaged in the criminal act of ripping them from games, the only person you should credit is the origional maker of the sprites, IE the company that made the game.
theduckofanime at 4:52PM, Sept. 15, 2006
Word bubbles help a lot. Also color coded text is not needed. Also you suffer from bit mixing really really bad. Really, I can't make too much out of this comic due to the fact half the text is completely unreadable.
will123 at 6:22AM, Sept. 15, 2006
I can't read much of it I am here to help (i use Paint) Ok 1st click on the rectangle ( i used them since i am a beginner like you) also you don't need to use rectangles (to use click on rectangle and 3 lines thing will appear under the item bar click on the middle one so paste the writing on then use the square over it and paste the writing in the square 2 words text tails use the polygon shape thing and click on it and again there will be 3 lines make a text bubble tail with it and then you have done text bubbles
soonmme at 7:42PM, Sept. 14, 2006
a darker 1
sonic2005 at 7:02PM, Sept. 14, 2006
i know it is just that when i make a new color i really do not know what color to pick for the shading
soonmme at 4:53PM, Sept. 14, 2006
ok ill help you shadeing by the way most sprites that can be found online are preshaded (if thats a word)
sonic2005 at 3:36PM, Sept. 14, 2006
if any one who knows how to shade and wants to help me with shadeing or tech me how to shade it will be vary help full
sonic2005 at 2:49AM, Sept. 14, 2006
i really do not know how to shade so
sonic2005 at 2:49AM, Sept. 14, 2006
yes i take any help you guys offer
soonmme at 6:41PM, Sept. 13, 2006
like i said before maybee i should help
Egnio at 6:19PM, Sept. 13, 2006
Cyan recolors hurt my eyes. Worse when they're not shaded. Improve speech bubbles... well, add speech bubbles. And work on your grammar. I can't really read some of the text for the last 2 reasons.
soonmme at 7:46PM, Sept. 12, 2006
get bgs and other things here [url]http://www.themysticalforestzone.com/[/url] or here [url]http://sprites.fireball20xl.com/index.php[/url]
Tomcat at 7:11PM, Sept. 12, 2006
Needs text bubbles Recolors need to be shaded. Also if your not gonna' use the shift key just make it a smaller text and press the cap locks key like real comic makers do.
silverboard04 at 7:07PM, Sept. 12, 2006
you need to make text bubles the words are unreadable
soonmme at 6:31PM, Sept. 12, 2006
maybee i should help you with a few things
sonic2005 at 6:26PM, Sept. 12, 2006
yaya i know but he is only going to be there for like 2 to 5 or 7 pages then i will not use him again
chaosflame24 at 6:14PM, Sept. 12, 2006
OOOOOOO one screw up. plus the ummm i think that a DBZ sprite looks like crap with sonic sprites.