Prologue
IronWolf on Feb. 8, 2006
Gasp! It's true! I'm still alive! Expect some changes in the prologue - half the space, for one thing. Oh, and Hadeed (whose name has been changed for greater symbolism) is the sister/main character. She just isn't on screen… I didn't finish the coloring on Don, Lugh, and Dearga (the black bitch with the horns) because I thought it looked stylistic. Now I have my doubts, but… I'm not redoing the page AGAIN. Between that and school, I've been insanely busy, but I hope I can resume a steady trickle of pages.
carvajal at 12:43PM, March 26, 2006
I like the dew claws.
Amelius at 10:31PM, Feb. 22, 2006
Such an awesome intro! And I love that green on dark, it's pretty ^_^
Randal at 7:09AM, Feb. 18, 2006
*dark
Randal at 7:08AM, Feb. 18, 2006
decent writing, the picture's a little dard though. =)
rmccool at 1:49PM, Feb. 17, 2006
a good start will keep an eye on your work :)
Mina_Lunga at 2:19PM, Feb. 12, 2006
Why change her name? I don't know my mythology well enough to understand the connection. Your use of black and green, and animal anatomy, are wonderful. You do critters so darn well!
Cheeko at 6:19PM, Feb. 9, 2006
Cooolll... I'm already hooked. I love the glowy eyes, and they really look like they're running through the night sky among the aurora.
IronWolf at 7:22AM, Feb. 9, 2006
... Damnit. You're right, ejb. I stand an idiot. Everyone will get used to the name... Until the point I absentmindedly type it in to the text, then spend the rest of the comic trying to fix that error.
ejb at 6:37AM, Feb. 9, 2006
Very nice color work here, but the whole name change thing is freakin' me out. Two quick edits: "There's" should be "There are" and "remenant" should be "remnant."
petey at 4:07AM, Feb. 9, 2006
Scath, not Hadeed...Scath, not Hadeed. I think I can get used to it. Love the minimal color, makes that pretty aurora pop out.
iagojester at 11:53PM, Feb. 8, 2006
Ooo, the depth of this page is very very effective. And I enjoy the color immensely. Yeeehaw!
daidaishar at 9:33PM, Feb. 8, 2006
I like the new page a lot. It's good to see our canine friends again, and the special effects are particularly effective. A quick critique: the text almost runs off the pages at the edges, so narrowing it a bit or centering it may improve the page. I always hate adding text onto these full pages; it's tough to do and I rarely do it well.