Kim at 5:10PM, May 1, 2006

Delia is hot! My type of gal! Woohoo! And don't get down, everyone just want's to help you out cause you got a good thing going here! ;-)

nissan at 8:08AM, April 30, 2006

thanks by the comments and recommendations, I will keep in mind them,I will be modifying the quick page or I will write it in my native language. Gracias por los comentarios y recomendaciones, los tendré en cuenta, o lo escribiré. estare modificando la pagina pronto

jxknight at 5:50AM, April 30, 2006

I think you should ask a friend of yers to be an editor, someone who's very good with english or something. I get tons of mistakes in my dialogues as well, cause I speak three languages everyday -_- Its looking great so far, keep it up!

VegaX at 4:28AM, April 30, 2006

Really lovely art. Really nice. The english is kinda wonky but i understand its not your first language.

Emotional at 10:32PM, April 29, 2006

oh dear I'd brush up on your english alittle more (listen to some american talk shows or somthing) the conversation is really really fake... that or you should get a writer. or do it in your native lauguage. ps. actully you could really benifit from a writer. ps.s I love the art :D woo woo WOO!

Rich at 8:44PM, April 29, 2006

The story and art are pretty cool so far.

spaz at 8:26PM, April 29, 2006

Amazing work. In the 1st panel I think your trying to say " What happened? They delay to much I should have kept sleeping." and in the 3rd.. I'm not sure what You mean. But by far amazing work.