I think in the next page you should make the cat take off her shirt because it's "Hot in here" and then yeah, just more nudity i think, great art by the way
I think in the next page you should make the cat take off her shirt because it's "Hot in here" and then yeah, just more nudity i think, great art by the way
yea ! i enjoyed the sense of confusion here, like ; who the frak are these 2? and WTF are they doing, it's almost like they're just playing around, i especially like the look on her face in the last panel ~!
Thank you for your detailed comment ipokino. I really do understand where you are coming from, and I do use transitions elsewhere in the comic (although as little as possible). But this time I wanted to achieve a feeling of uncertainty. I want the reader to think "what is this?" so that I can provide the answer later. I generally don't like putting up textboxes in the corner of the page explaining things to the reader. I aim to explain through the art and dialogue and do transitions that way.
Dude, a, tag like "Meanwhile in blah blah blah land a blah blah blah fights for her...whatever, ect" would be good. Transitions are good! Can we say "Transitions are GOOD...?" I knew you could. I hate when comic stories go flitting off into left field without so much as a by your leave or a "you are now here" statement. Frankly, you are too damn fine a comic creator to be pulling this!!!
Art 4 (Color would get you a 5...I love color...)
Story up to this page 4
Transitions...urrr 1...?
thrugar at 1:25PM, Dec. 27, 2007
Nice story I will start reading it more often now that your updating!
Terroquita at 5:53AM, Dec. 2, 2007
You might not believe this but I have decided to start updating this comic again. Next page is 50% done. Thanks for all comments.
Darkgryffin at 1:17PM, Nov. 21, 2007
sigh, another great comic I come across that seems to have fallen off the radar, well faved, and hoping for updates
Laan at 6:32PM, Oct. 19, 2007
Uh...you missed... :p
Kim at 8:39PM, Aug. 7, 2007
Haha, either those goggles are too thick or she's a plain bad shot! Awesome layout as always!
Jaffa at 4:58AM, July 27, 2007
WHen the FUCK ARE YOU GONNA UDATE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
dragonrider at 5:17PM, June 23, 2007
Fantastic art as always, however; the blond reminds me of someone, just can't think who.
Terroquita at 3:26PM, June 19, 2007
I'm working on some new pages again, but I'm not happy with the shading on these last 3-4 ones. I might need to redo them.
Darkmax at 5:29AM, June 2, 2007
Very Nice!!!! Byron The Devilfish Project
Jaffa at 4:38PM, April 24, 2007
sorry, but hey, 2 5's ya know
Jaffa at 4:30PM, April 24, 2007
I think in the next page you should make the cat take off her shirt because it's "Hot in here" and then yeah, just more nudity i think, great art by the way
Jaffa at 4:30PM, April 24, 2007
I think in the next page you should make the cat take off her shirt because it's "Hot in here" and then yeah, just more nudity i think, great art by the way
lothar at 2:04PM, April 7, 2007
yea ! i enjoyed the sense of confusion here, like ; who the frak are these 2? and WTF are they doing, it's almost like they're just playing around, i especially like the look on her face in the last panel ~!
Terroquita at 12:53AM, March 19, 2007
Thank you for your detailed comment ipokino. I really do understand where you are coming from, and I do use transitions elsewhere in the comic (although as little as possible). But this time I wanted to achieve a feeling of uncertainty. I want the reader to think "what is this?" so that I can provide the answer later. I generally don't like putting up textboxes in the corner of the page explaining things to the reader. I aim to explain through the art and dialogue and do transitions that way.
ipokino at 2:49PM, March 18, 2007
Dude, a, tag like "Meanwhile in blah blah blah land a blah blah blah fights for her...whatever, ect" would be good. Transitions are good! Can we say "Transitions are GOOD...?" I knew you could. I hate when comic stories go flitting off into left field without so much as a by your leave or a "you are now here" statement. Frankly, you are too damn fine a comic creator to be pulling this!!! Art 4 (Color would get you a 5...I love color...) Story up to this page 4 Transitions...urrr 1...?