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Mr E on Feb. 23, 2007
This is my first page, tell me if you like it.
at 3:32AM, March 1, 2007
cool 1st page
at 11:01PM, Feb. 27, 2007
Haha, now THERES a hero we can all relate to. Good one dude, 5.
at 3:10AM, Feb. 27, 2007
Welcome to Drunkduck!
at 6:42PM, Feb. 25, 2007
Dood sweet! Bout time you finished one...and you got way more comments than I did on my first comic, like wtf!? Anyway this is great, keep it up.
at 11:45AM, Feb. 25, 2007
Keep it up man, this stuff is truely funny.
at 8:16AM, Feb. 25, 2007
that thingw ith the orphans?
at 6:38AM, Feb. 25, 2007
Oh, man, I love the thing with the orphans. XD
at 4:48AM, Feb. 25, 2007
its not a bad for a first page. It must of been a horrible orphanage, stunted there growth. I think there funny
at 2:12AM, Feb. 25, 2007
Though, isn't anything possible when you're a superhero?
at 2:09AM, Feb. 25, 2007
man, winzrella, I never even noticed that, funny how you can be looking at something for so long and not think about it...well i'll be keeping my eye out for stuff like that in the future. Thanks.
at 1:55AM, Feb. 25, 2007
Of course super heroes too need a brakke from work just like everyone else so a bar for super heroes is a working idea. It's funny how he holds the children is his hand like dolls. However, I know you are showing his backside in the second panel. Still it looks like his cloak just flipped around to the front side. The main reason to that is the hands. You have the hands wrong way, there is no way of flipping your hand like that. So I would advise you to move your own hands around and see how they should be in that panel. Other than that it's a good start. When you have more pages to show I can say a bit more. And don't feel bad for the mistake in the second panel. Everyone do those. I often go in front of a mirror to how my own hands move in different positions. And it really helps. Alright, I think I have been writing enough for now. Keep it up! :D
at 1:49AM, Feb. 25, 2007
Wow, the orphans are so small that he could grab them both by his hands.
at 1:48AM, Feb. 25, 2007
Hey thanks for checking out my book New Nation. I've just posted Issue 2 and 3 will be up soon (its all finished but I want to complete 4 before I post 3). As for your book it's good but not great. I'm sure you'd rather me be honest than just feed you a line to stroke your ego. My main problem isn't nesesarily with the art as some may not enjoy it (personally I like the simplistic look to it and feel it adds to the humor.) My issue is with the ending of the page. It seems to me this type of book would be more widely accepted if you ended each page with a funny joke, since you aren't posting serveral pages at once, that way you can keep readers coming back for more. I suggest you check out the book PvP from Image Comics. It'll show you perfect examples of what I'm talking about.
Can't wait to see more work.
Ninja Frog Comics
at 1:35AM, Feb. 25, 2007