Ch. 12 Page 03
dragonsong12 on Feb. 7, 2010
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So…yeah, this isn't terribly original of me, as I said, this part of the story was planned for very early on in the process.
I had fun drawing that first panel though. :D
How do you like those rough sketchy crowds in the last panel? Yeah, I'm not good at drawing crowds, just ignore them.
A lot was cut out of the last chapter, looking over it again I realized that cutting that stuff made it move too fast. I'll talk a bit more about that on a future page, but yes, that last chapter could've easily been twice as long. Sorry if it felt rushed.
Thanks for reading! See you next week!
HawkandFloAdventures at 3:35PM, Dec. 26, 2022
Pokemon showdown, smogon overused, here's hoping he remembered to put EV's on and he's got at least one boosting move.
crocodile___smile at 7:46PM, Feb. 18, 2010
he's digging his claws RIGHT into the back of his adversary's head ! you get ten points for being intense and grotesque and representing a form of violence i've never seen in a comic book before. (i've never seen claws sinking into skull before)
DreamFog at 7:24PM, Feb. 10, 2010
Woot! Called it! .... *Cough* Right then... Honestly, no need to be critical about small crowds, most people only skim past them anyway to the main focal point anyway so it'll feel like wasted effort if you do go all out on them. You could of just worked a little more detail into the top seats here and there and no one could say you were lazy. I am loving the first panel by the way.
Bhudicae at 4:13PM, Feb. 10, 2010
WOW! O.O First panel is awesome! Poor Tren!! Please don't hurt him too bad! He's, like, my 2nd favorite Boetheri! ...Yeh, I'm biased, but you know who my #1 fave is! :)P hahaha
crocodile___smile at 7:14PM, Feb. 8, 2010
i sincerely hope everything turns out all right, and nobody we care about gets hurt !
theorah at 2:24PM, Feb. 8, 2010
Oh this is so cruel! :( ...cruel, but makes me intent to read on! XD
Tantz_Aerine at 1:31PM, Feb. 8, 2010
whew, logging in was a bother... been following this anyway though, and it's suddenly gotten into second gear. Can't wait to see what happens!
SweetSong at 6:08AM, Feb. 8, 2010
Yeah, first panel is amazing.
Kikaru at 5:57AM, Feb. 8, 2010
Wow, that's left feild for me, I didnt see it coming o.o I mean... if they're used as slaves, then use them for menial tasks and stuff. That was my reasoning. Not!Nareth is really aiming for Real!Nareth to die quickly, isnt he?
Lupina24 at 12:33AM, Feb. 8, 2010
the first panel is amazing!! love the details, and really hope Tren's alright.
danendesign at 10:30PM, Feb. 7, 2010
Pretty much what I thought it would be, but doesn't cheapen the thrill at all! Poor Tren, this can't have been a good last while for him. And I gotta say, I really loathed Rallah at the start and for most of what's happened. But I'm starting to see her grow more as a person and I'm really starting to like her. Fabulous work as always!