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dragonsong12 on July 7, 2014
You're so out of it you're talking to yourself in a hall, Nareth. Maybe you do need some down time.
There was part of me that kind of wanted to depict Nareth's dad's reaction to everything, because I love seeing character reactions…but it felt like that would be a bit of a waste of an update, since we already know everything that's going to be said - the reactions would be the only addition and I think you can imagine them well enough so we're just skipping over the recap hour.
…something about the scan of this page is off. I might try to adjust it a bit and reupload…we'll see.
Thanks for reading! See you next week!
dragonsong12 at 10:26AM, July 11, 2014
It seems like a lot of things are really weighing on him at the moment, doesn't it? I've been pretty unsatisfied overall with the expressiveness of my characters, both in their faces and in body language, and have been trying to improve that. I know I've still got a long way to go, but knowing that my efforts are starting to pay off somewhat helps a great deal. Thank you!
Mina_Lunga at 9:21AM, July 10, 2014
Lines under the eyes? Unsteady gait? Muttering to himself? Our boy is unwell, indeed ... lingering spell-shock, or something more sinister? Great job making Nareth look really tired and unwell!