Mina_Lunga at 12:55PM, July 5, 2015

Sometimes a cigar is just a cigar - and a plot device is just a plot device :-) He still fit into the story pretty well, so it's not like he stood out, and the dialogue after he left was good for character development.

dragonsong12 at 1:10PM, July 4, 2015

Thanks! This chapter has really been a lot of fun to do. :D I don't really think there'd be much crowd involvement. They've seen altercations like this before, they might stop and look, but they probably wouldn't do anything. That said, it might have been interesting to see. Rich guy however...yeah, I can justify it, but if I'm really being honest I just wanted to get to Tai and Kei arguing. Haha, that was just me rushing things a bit. He was really more of a plot device and that's my mistake. :)

Mina_Lunga at 8:55AM, July 3, 2015

Excellent smug look! I can feel the "heh heh heh" exuding from that posture. And great little altercation scene in the last few pages! It was a good way to demonstrate the different attitudes of the characters, and a little of the politics of their actions. Although it did seem a little odd to me that the rich guy gave up quite so easily, and that there wasn't any crowd involvement.

dragonsong12 at 6:36AM, June 30, 2015

It was the good part too. Ghosts are so inconsiderate.

ejb at 4:46AM, June 29, 2015

Sometimes you can't even get through a good book without being haunted.