Banes at 9:07AM, April 14, 2014

@jerrie - Hahahaha! The word AUGH! never fails to make me laugh.

Banes at 9:07AM, April 14, 2014

@bravo - Haha...I like how it's specific to short gray haired people's dentures. And you're right; something written is as subjective as any piece of art. But there are parts to it like building up the tension, having people's motivations make sense and not being too talky (er...see the next page) that can be worked on. Not to mention having a premise that doesn't work to begin with (confession...that's a fear for this very story. But I'm going for it and working hard on it!)

jerrie at 8:24AM, April 14, 2014

augh! look at those teeth!

bravo1102 at 2:46AM, April 14, 2014

Yellowed fangs on short gray haired people are usually poorly maintained dentures. This little guy could have been as tall as TK when he was TK's age but a couple of spine surgeries later and he's a little person. "Better written" is highly subjective. I find "better written" often just means more snarky and cynical as opposed to decent portrayal of people and events.

Kou the Mad at 10:38PM, April 10, 2014

on the upside though, Sword Art Online Abridged exists because of it, and it is fantastic (and genuinely better written than the actual show......which is pathetic.)

Banes at 9:44PM, April 10, 2014

@El Cid - My supposition is usually that everyone's going to know exactly where every story's going right from page one. That's my irrational fear. Total bafflement's the other end of the reaction spectrum of course! And understandable at this odd point. We'll see if this toothy fellow can make some sense of this...

Banes at 7:42PM, April 10, 2014

@kawaii - haha...he is a bit Chuckie like. Wait...people's teeth don't look like this where you live? Fancy!

El Cid at 6:59PM, April 10, 2014

??!!! ...and another couple of ??s.

kawaiidaigakusei at 6:45PM, April 10, 2014

Check out the razor teeth on that guy. Now I believe TK's whole dream sequence was not even a dream afterall. This little poop is Chuckie all grown up.

Banes at 3:15PM, April 10, 2014

@bravo - hahaha...I had to look him up. As popular as that show is, I still haven't seen it.

bravo1102 at 12:28PM, April 10, 2014

And so Tyrion Lannister began his exile in the world of Typical Strange.

Banes at 6:06AM, April 10, 2014

@KimLuster - Even when that "little thing" has his face squished into the floor. XD

Banes at 6:03AM, April 10, 2014

@Kou - Hahaha!

KimLuster at 4:36AM, April 10, 2014

Haha... That TK, never was bothered the little things

Kou the Mad at 1:45AM, April 10, 2014

"It Started Long Ago, In This terrible Anime called Sword Art Online. An Anime so Terrible, That it was worse than Aeon Flux."