i agree with midge on the commenting thing, but aside from that, fuckin WONDERFUL page. you could NUKE with this shit!
only thing that bothers me with this page is that the text doesnt seem to go with the picture, i dont mean what you wrote, but i see it and it just looks like a beautifuly drawn page with some text thrown at the top. dont know wether it's cuase there's too much space in between or what. but it just doesnt flow right.
I don't tend to read those because I desire to understand the comic page by itself. Because consider it this way...if you were to publish this would a reader have your comments there to explain what you were trying to communicate? probably not.
so what is the conextion with the guy on the last page and the text and creature on this page? not that I don't love it but I didn't see the connection...also the text reads to much like a copy/pasted paragraph...I wonder if a different font which reflects the kinetic energy of your art...
PIT_FACE at 7:18PM, Nov. 27, 2007
i agree with midge on the commenting thing, but aside from that, fuckin WONDERFUL page. you could NUKE with this shit! only thing that bothers me with this page is that the text doesnt seem to go with the picture, i dont mean what you wrote, but i see it and it just looks like a beautifuly drawn page with some text thrown at the top. dont know wether it's cuase there's too much space in between or what. but it just doesnt flow right.
TheMidge28 at 9:29AM, Oct. 17, 2007
I don't tend to read those because I desire to understand the comic page by itself. Because consider it this way...if you were to publish this would a reader have your comments there to explain what you were trying to communicate? probably not.
ultimetal at 2:16PM, Oct. 16, 2007
It helps to read the artist's comments, friend. This is Alfred's thoughts. While the creature is one of the devils he is speaking about.
TheMidge28 at 1:00PM, Oct. 16, 2007
so what is the conextion with the guy on the last page and the text and creature on this page? not that I don't love it but I didn't see the connection...also the text reads to much like a copy/pasted paragraph...I wonder if a different font which reflects the kinetic energy of your art...
ultimetal at 1:07PM, Oct. 10, 2007
Actually, that name is unfamiliar to me.
PJBRO at 7:59AM, Oct. 10, 2007
ok so i LOVE your linework this creature rings of chris bachalo - are you a fan of his work?