400
usedbooks on Jan. 13, 2008
I don't really like this page. The expressions aren't quite right, and the layout sucks. It was tough wording and placing dialogue… But it was far worse before I did my digital editing. (You can see the original version here.) If it isn't apparent from context clues, Seiko is talking about calling a hospital, not the police. And no, this isn't some clever plot device to get Seiko alone with Fudo… Okay, it is. :-P
Anyway, I managed to make it all fit and improve the dialogue too. I think I did an okay job salvaging this page. – Oh, and it is page 400. I wish it was a prettier one for the “milestone,” but that's just the way things go.
LanceDanger: Thanks. ^_^
Peipei: Seiko is playing this situation carefully. She knows that any violent/dramatic reaction would be fanning the flames.
dueeast: Thanks. His initial reaction to people in his home – one he stabbed and one he tormented – is definitely natural and expected.
n_y_japlander: Seiko gave him the benefit of the doubt – assuming there was doubt…
Priest_Revan: Thanks. I've been working on my layout so my links will be more noticeable.
simonitro: Thanks for checking out my comic. :-) I enjoyed reading all of your comments, and I'm glad you've liked the story so far. It just makes me really happy to continue doing this (and putting in an effort to improve) when I know there are people who enjoy it.
kaitia at 1:45PM, Nov. 20, 2009
400!!!!!!
Tantz_Aerine at 7:40AM, Jan. 14, 2008
COngratulations for your 400th page :) And interesting show of strength from Seiko- goes to show she just invests in different values. Always like that sort of thing. ;)
dueeast at 6:25AM, Jan. 14, 2008
Happy 400th! I love the first frame's dialogue and expression the most. :)
GTLB at 5:35AM, Jan. 14, 2008
400! Nice!
Peipei at 1:51AM, Jan. 14, 2008
You know, I think Seiko and Alex shoulda left Fudo out in the woods...Now, he's gonna try to fight back now that they're about to call the cops on him xD
LanceDanger at 10:19PM, Jan. 13, 2008
Happy 400! =D Fudo wouldn't be Fudo if he wouldn't have had a concealed knife around or on him XD
n_y_japlander at 10:14PM, Jan. 13, 2008
HAPPY 400TH PAGE!!!!! (^O^) Don't worry... it's fine for the milestone!!! (-_-) Fudo... Hope he is more greatful than he appears...
simonitro at 10:07PM, Jan. 13, 2008
He must've had knives in his sleeves... He's one tricky, son-of-a-gun.