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usedbooks on July 18, 2016
The dialogue on the last couple pages went through a few drafts. I like that Yuki does very little prompting for Lee to start rattling off defensively. Originally, I had thought of Yuki presenting more of her “evidence” and making direct accusations, but this works out much better. She reveals very little of what they uncovered (about the folder and the seatbelt mark).
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KimLuster: Thanks! Yuki's family are mostly suburban church-going types.
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plymayer: Not a pleasant chat at all.
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ghostrunner at 7:41AM, July 21, 2016
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Anubis at 6:07PM, July 19, 2016
Ive known peoples like that. no matter what, they always seem to have an organised alibi
tupapayon at 9:47AM, July 19, 2016
when people say they don't believe me, but keep asking questions I just tell them: it doesn't matter what I say...
Peipei at 11:30PM, July 18, 2016
The tension is pretty heavy in this page, hope this doesn't hurt their relationship anymore than it already has! I wonder if she'll follow up with the lead.
KimLuster at 4:49AM, July 18, 2016
It's good dialogue, and very nice artwork! I wonder if she disbelieves him as much as she says... Normally people I don't believe I don't listen to that long! :D
plymayer at 3:48AM, July 18, 2016
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