V05 - Pg31
MrHades on Nov. 28, 2012
The last page of issue five!.
McPhaidon has put out arrest warrants on the whole team, including a kill on sight for Pendragon, but Ophelia is on case
Im currently looking for any fan art to run for a couple of weeks
while I get the script for the next issue sorted. Please contact me if
you do! Thanks in advance.
See you next week for some filler/fan art!
Dan
MrHades
PS
Any feedback on what you like/don't like about the series would be greatly appreciated at this point. This is the first ‘proper’ comic which I have created and written entirely by myself and am very much feeling my way as I go.
I am seriously considering doing this at two pages a week in the New Year, like I used to do on Retake. I need to tell this story and at a page a week, that's gonna take a friggin long time!
MrHades at 4:33AM, Nov. 29, 2012
Thanks for the feedback everyone! Cid: I'm glad you are enjoying it. I've worked hard on the script/story. I'm hoping that people aren't getting lost/confused, as it's quite a large cast, but from what you've said, it seems I'm on the right track. The next chapter gets very 'heavy' indeed. You don't wanna be living in the World in which the story take place.
El Cid at 10:33AM, Nov. 28, 2012
Good spot to end the chapter. No real complaints about anything thus far. You've got great characters with some depth to them and believable relationships to each other; the writing is intelligent and snappy; the plot is easy to grasp but complex enough to remain interesting and pack a nice surprise or two around every next corner. I'm very much enjoying it.
fukujinzuke at 10:22AM, Nov. 28, 2012
Oh man! Can't wait for the next chapter!
AzuJOD at 5:00AM, Nov. 28, 2012
Oh no, they're going to become... Hunted!
plymayer at 3:48AM, Nov. 28, 2012
Hhmmm.... Not looking good for the team.