Warui Page 2: Battle for the Soul
Obduratus on Jan. 13, 2007
Yaaay, I put this page together from files I found on my old hard drive.
If you dont know about this comic, It was posted in 2003 by my friend Obduratus and I on a personal website. We reached about 12 pages and abandoned the comic due to personal issues. Originally, it was pencil only, but I went back and colored a few pages in 2004 hoping to have renewed interest in the project, but it fizzled out.
Now, this is also not the same scripted dialog that Obduratus wrote. I rewrote it tonight except for a few lines, like in the 6th panel where the first sentence was from the script, so its not what was originally posted.
Kanjii of the Red G'Di.. G'Di means Cat
VaNoVo! is Kanjii's spell to summon his weapon.
Also, and its very poorly transitioned here between panels 2 and 3, they are appearing in the Mid-world to battle. Its like an alternate dimension so they wont destroy the surroundings they were in.
Isnt that considerate?
One other thing..
I'm posting this mostly for you Freakeh ;p
If It werent for your interest, I probably wouldnt have done so!
kaminari at 12:29AM, Jan. 15, 2007
uuuhhh, whoops.. I left out a panel between 2 and 3... no wonder I thought it was awkward
Obduratus at 5:40PM, Jan. 14, 2007
*tappa tappa tappa*
Freakeh at 12:14PM, Jan. 14, 2007
Yes!!! I've been waiting for this day!! XD Is that Obsess I see in panel 6? He's so tiny and adorable. x3 I like the transition of Kanjii's weapon gradually becoming solid. (Same for Shim'own's. :3) And the transition works fine in the third panel =3 Even if the panel is simply so close-up you cannot -see- the surroundings of the Mid-World, it looks to me that there's one background - no background - different background, so the transition is understandable. :3 The colouring looks great! It really brings out the contrast of the differing alignments, with Kanjii looking bold whereas the Enzeru are pale and light. Kanjii don't listen to Shim'own calling you weak! You -will- win! I have faith in you like I had faith in the comic! O=!