I already made some comics but this is my first one on internet. Also don't look at the qaulity i screwed it up a little. But my next one will better qaulity.
Make your outline better, improve speech bubbles, I can fricken park a Ford Truck under the speech bubble in the last panel. Work on it please
-VinceLikesRooster
Well my opinion hasn't changed...
It is funny, but the emoticon shouldn't have been neccacary.
And as the graphical whore i am, i would have LAUGHED if the balloons were better. Some of the balloons had a lot of open space left. :P
Just one more thing... I told you this before but this time, listen, ok? ^^'
Those who didnt play Halo 1 or 2 have no idea what the heck that purple thing is... Or what are the coloured things he is talking about... So add some extra info.
Cya in 7 days! ^^ Bas
VinceLikesRooster at 4:06PM, Oct. 24, 2007
Make your outline better, improve speech bubbles, I can fricken park a Ford Truck under the speech bubble in the last panel. Work on it please -VinceLikesRooster
Bazneuz at 10:14AM, Feb. 16, 2007
Well my opinion hasn't changed... It is funny, but the emoticon shouldn't have been neccacary. And as the graphical whore i am, i would have LAUGHED if the balloons were better. Some of the balloons had a lot of open space left. :P Just one more thing... I told you this before but this time, listen, ok? ^^' Those who didnt play Halo 1 or 2 have no idea what the heck that purple thing is... Or what are the coloured things he is talking about... So add some extra info. Cya in 7 days! ^^ Bas