First review is of Cubicle artwork by Genejoke and written by elektro as I understand it.
The robot KU-500 looks at the comic positively and I look for the weak points. I'll try to be more critical as I go along. It's a weak point of my own. Being criticial is a fast way to improve. Try it out.
Remember if the comicvores eat your work, it's considered a good thing.
Indeed it is, I consider every bit of feedback and review essential for improving what I do. Sometimes it takes a while for me to make the improvements but it is always in the back of my mind.
Thanks for comments.
@Genejoke: I agree you guys do a good job not overloading the reader most of the time. It's just something all comickers should keep in mind.
Thanks for the input on the art. As for the writing versus heavy amounts of text on page, it is something we were both aware of.
It was a choice of word heavy or have a lot of pages where very little of interest happens. Obviously we opted for the word heavy introduction, however now we are past that stage and I would like to think the later pages and forthcoming ones are less book like.
That aside I like the style of the reviews, you offer up something a little different.
tiki_carol at 9:28AM, July 30, 2010
This is falling into the "Why didn't I think of that" category. You are Brilliant Nergal! Two thumbs Two toes up.
Genejoke at 11:14PM, July 26, 2010
Indeed it is, I consider every bit of feedback and review essential for improving what I do. Sometimes it takes a while for me to make the improvements but it is always in the back of my mind.
Nergal at 2:01PM, July 24, 2010
Thanks for comments. @Genejoke: I agree you guys do a good job not overloading the reader most of the time. It's just something all comickers should keep in mind.
johlin at 8:36AM, July 24, 2010
This is a pretty cool setup!
I Am The 1337 Master at 6:58AM, July 24, 2010
:)
harkovast at 4:22AM, July 24, 2010
I'm liking what I am seeing. Have a fav.
Genejoke at 1:38AM, July 24, 2010
Thanks for the input on the art. As for the writing versus heavy amounts of text on page, it is something we were both aware of. It was a choice of word heavy or have a lot of pages where very little of interest happens. Obviously we opted for the word heavy introduction, however now we are past that stage and I would like to think the later pages and forthcoming ones are less book like. That aside I like the style of the reviews, you offer up something a little different.
ifelldownthestairs at 1:09AM, July 24, 2010
nice! lovin' the format.