Zero Sum 3
exile on Dec. 4, 2007
For this page I changed a few things, I went back to my normal coloring method, but still left out shading et all. The way I draw our traveler has changed somewhat too (despite the fact this is only the second comic with her in it, Sorry but I wanted too.)
I promise the pace picks up soon but its important for me to establish a sense of loneliness.
note: I changed the last panel a little cause I really disliked it, as it was really quickly done originally to replace a panel that I decided that we are not ready for in the story. I am still not super happy with it, but now it at least minimizes some of the worst bits.
exile at 10:47AM, Dec. 5, 2007
Yeah, I think that maybe loneliness is a bit of a stretch, she is used to being alone. Solitariness is a better description, but not without a twinge of missing people.
trevoramueller at 8:31AM, Dec. 5, 2007
I like it. Not sure the character looks lonely, but she's certainly solitary. There's no one else around her. She doesn't seem to mind being this way, though. Until that last panel, that is.