cloud vs axel
joraoflite on July 10, 2008
ok here i remade my kingdom hearts cross fusion with bleach this one will many new character and not to tell like most of the final fantasy charcter will be in the sprite comic so this is part1 i hope you guy enjoy it and please leave your comments once done reading.
SquishyNinja at 3:27PM, Dec. 17, 2008
Too...much...empty...space... awkwardness...level s...rising...
Blacksuit Sora at 12:32PM, July 11, 2008
Pretty good, better than last time the wording makes it confusing as there are plenty of run ons but you're getting better. There is still white space though.