While I like the dark and moody art, I have to say “be careful” with lighting especially on the second page. The only visible light source is the hanging light but the rest of the picture is bright while shadows are being cast on his midsection which makes it seem off.
Still, even with no lettering yet (whether it's intentional or part of the story, whatever) I like what's going on… something about an alchoholic ogre remembering his wedding day being interrupted by elven hunters? You get an extra 50 points from me because I have a “thing” for stories where monsters are the main characters :D
Thanks for taking a look. I havent done the lettering yet because I'm lazy. heh.
Those are supposed to be a troll military. In the story the Trolls = muslim extremists, Ogres=Armenians, Elves(who show up later)=indian, and there are other creatures to represent the middle east too. Anyway, the country is attacked by Monsters=terrorist, and our Ogre is mistaken for one of them.
Nadya, has very fine art indeed. Very moody designs. I like how you ended it.