I am fairly new to the whole comic thing. I need lots of feed back on my comic Trouble to connect. Its about a girl who's mind generates rifts in reality that let creatures call Voiders through. She is naturaly a reclouse and she lives with two voiders. Feron is hers while Era is a voider staying with her (she adopted her).
http://www.drunkduck.com/Trouble_to_connect/index.php?p=204243

As well I would really like it if someone who enjoyed it thus far would help me by taking my rough sketches and story and fashioning them with apporpriate shading or helping me to do this.

howdy howdy!
just checked out ur comic, its pretty cool. ur name is cute too btw^^