This is for comments on recently posted comic pages…savvy?

Prologue: Page 4 added. I definitely think the transition between days looks better. Had this weird split thing before. =/

I agree with you.

And I have to say that I love the last panel.
Jack and Emily look too cute. :)

Prologue: Page 5 added…where we once again witness Jack making the SMART move of leaving the door wide open while he looks outside.

I'm not sure if this was intentional or not, but I like the use of barrettes in Emily's hair better than the bows…yup…not much else to say but yea new page update!

Yeah, I left the bow in her hair in the first pages for the hell of it…but I thought the barrette would be a bit more…normal for a woman to wear. XP

Prologue: Page 6 added…in all its spookyness.

spookyness indeed sarah..

I love the leaf in pannel 2 and again in pannel 5…little details like that get me…it shows your involved… savvy

Prologue: Page 7 added.
Eeep!

Prologue: Page 8 added…and where did everybody go? XD

I like this avatar better you seem so much happier ^^. Loved the page, esp. the glowy eyes, but what are the soundfx of the waaah and uwaah what is creating them? i've been VERY busy with school so had no time to do anything :(

That would be the baby making the “waaah” noises…it didn't stop crying ya know. =P

Prologue: Page 9 added!

Prologue: Page 10 added…but no one's here so who cares? Probably shouldn't bother posting here anymore. XP

I'm here YaY. but i feel so lonely *cries*

Well…I know I've been out of contact w/ the compt for the last week on account of spring break & stuff–so maybe others are/have been doing stuff away from the internet in an elsewhere place 2?

Anyway—yay–new comix pages!

Scary m-dash craze right now?

I'd post more, if I had anything interesting to contribute. -_-

Yeah, that's always been the problem with my forums…nothing to talk about. (How come some other comic forums don't have that problem? XP)

Do I REALLY have to make a games section to get any traffic in here? XD

If you guys have any forum topic ideas, don't hestitate to make one.

Well, I dunno. Some of the comic forums out there have a lot of posters, all of which are excessively negative and critical of the author. Being relatively free of a huge crowd in your forum can spare you of that. And hey, at least your forum here is getting traffic at all, compared to many forums that don't. xD

A games section? Maybe that'll help stimulate it. :3 I d'no. I'm not exactly the Queen of Forum Management.

I'd come here more often, but I forget…
And most of the forums that I go to that have a lot of traffic is either people arguing, or people getting extremely off topic. I don't mind the latter, as it spawns some interesting conversations and we always manage to get back around to the original topic, but the former is just… well, that makes me happy that your forum doesn't get a lot of traffic. >__>

Meh, I'm still going to stop saying “bleh page is added”…at least for a while…but feel free to comment here when a new page is up!

I like page 14 alot its much better than the unrevised one especially the gore effects. Well done.
I thought Orlock had seen enough ripped arms not to be surprised by them though, he seems genuinely shocked at it. LOL

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I like page 14 alot its much better than the unrevised one especially the gore effects. Well done.
I thought Orlock had seen enough ripped arms not to be surprised by them though, he seems genuinely shocked at it. LOL

He's not shocked! That's just him being WIDE-EYED CRAZY!!! O_O XP

I liiiiike wide-eyed crazy ^^

I kept looking at the title for this page on DA and thinking “loss… loss of limb! Muahahahahahahahaha!”


I really like the silhouette panel. EEE!

Sarah, how much of a page buffer do you have between the page you are working on and the pages you release. Is having a buffer a good idea, I'm about to launch my own one, but if you say a buffer is good then i will wait otherwise i will post my pages as a preview and get to work on my next one. Hope for advice and support ^^

Right now, I just have a one page buffer…and I was busy this weekend so I didn't have time to work on the page after that…which is why the update is late. I usually make a page, and then post the previous, already completeled page after it's done.

I might end up screwing the buffer though in order to get up the page at a decent time, since I'm having a little bit of trouble deciding on whether or not to leave some stuff alone in the next pages…..the prologue is almost done anyway.

For a while I had a THREE page buffer…which I do recommend trying. It's nice being one step ahead…but the urge to post finished pages is strong though. It's probably best to ignore that urge unless you want to strictly keep to a specific schedule. I don't like schedules though, I find it easier just to update weekly at any time.

Page 15: In truth this must be the best page of the entire prologue, don't know what there is about it but its definitely the best, before or after your remake (although that did make it better). Well done Sarah, Keep going.

…..buh? XD Anyone here?

yay VP is alive again!

It may take people a while before they check the site again b/c they might still be thinking VP=on hiatus…acutally, me learning of the new page was random as I almost did not check the site, but I figured that it wouldn't take long to check…for me, school is over for now & summer things are gonna happen–I expect that others might be facing summers' impeding busyness…so it may tke a couple days before people realize it…

But yeah…just got to get the snowball rolling…

YAY Sarah is back drawing again ^_^
My sad diligence of checking everyday has finally paid off lol, looking great and hope you can post more. If you keep posting consistently then ferreter is right people will slowly come back. Jack is looking much handsomer in this one, but i preferred the background of the un-redone one.
ps hello ferreter