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Heroes Alliance: "The Psychosis Wave/Go Loco" (working titles - due to change)
AzuJOD at 7:52AM, April 17, 2011
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SympleSymon
Syd - Is it a Jewish robot/mech? What armaments does it have? Is Jacob the pilot or remote-controller?

Syd is a golem, which is more less a magic powered robot. It (or he?) doesn't really have any armaments, but it does have super strength and durability (and maybe fire a beam of light from it's mouth, I'm not sure).

Jacob is the pilot, but in an unusual way. Y'see, Jacob turns into a spirit or something and possesses or merges with Syd, essentially becoming him. It should be noted that Jacob cannot speak while he is merged with Syd, he can only growl and roar.

Is that what you needed to know?
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Hero at 4:37PM, April 17, 2011
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Blitz has super speed primarily and super strength and invulnerabillity in proportion to her speed. She also can defy the laws of friction.
TC Jr has amazing cat powers: Enhanced agility, speed, reflexes and durability and enhanced senses. Also he can make lighting out of his hands. He's got a little bit of heightened strength, but like Spidey level rather than hulk level. He also has an array of gadgetry and is savvy with detective work, martial arts and computers.

Black Knight is also savvy with detective work, martial arts and computers/gadetry. He wears a suit of powered armor that amplifies his strength 10 fold and protects him from most kinds of harm. He also has a sword that magically extends and contorts at his will. He's also a brilliant inventor and has really deep pockets.

Valkyrie is yet again another person savvy with detective work, martial arts and computers/gadetry. She is more of a western fist fight brawler though and tends to be more heavy on the fighting side of the triangle. Her main weapon is a katana with a grappling hook in the handle.

Hero is a computers and communications expert who I could quote the whole triangle of Batman abilities thing with. But his primary thing is computers and gadgets and he primarily fights using remote control floating robot sentries called “Afro Puffs” that he can throw at people or project holograms with among other things. Also he has a telescoping rapier.

Tech III has the same Bat-Triangle too but is specifically an expert in martial arts. Theoretically among the best martial artists in the world. He fights bare handed and specializes in Tiger Style Kung-Fu.
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SympleSymon at 7:17AM, June 23, 2011
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I'm BACK (obviously, lol), and about one-third of the way through the first draft of this epic chapter. And I mean EPIC! I'll probably post the work so far up here tomorrow for comments and feedback… unless Abt says otherwise?
Retake - What happens when a movie star goes from portraying a hero on the silverscreen to becoming one in real-life? Nothing good…

http://www.drunkduck.com/Retake
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Abt_Nihil at 9:28AM, June 24, 2011
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Uh… do you mean you'll post your complete first draft? I'm not sure we should post complete scripts, since that would be a potential major spoiler… but that's just my opinion. On second thought, it's obviously the most convenient way to provide input. So, I'll just leave that decision up to you! ^_^
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sux at 8:01PM, June 24, 2011
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I agree with Abt, perhaps PQ or something would work better since it means that its more private and allows for a more in dept look at the script, I don't know if that is possible, but I thought I would at least suggest it.
I like my horror films like I love my burgers…Full of Cheese!!

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SympleSymon at 8:19PM, June 24, 2011
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Both very good points - okay I'll send the work so far to the big jobs (abt, seb, Fuku, etc) along with anyone who's characters feature heavily. But please understand that I couldn't possibly send it to everyone every time I want to revise it. I hope y'all can trust me to do your guys justice.

Plus I need to pick abt's brains - I need German sentences!
Retake - What happens when a movie star goes from portraying a hero on the silverscreen to becoming one in real-life? Nothing good…

http://www.drunkduck.com/Retake
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Abt_Nihil at 11:34AM, Feb. 3, 2012
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SympleSymon wrote:
My new phone can write PQs, but for some reason can't recognise forum
post fields on here… If you could do me a favour, and let everyone on
the Psychosis Wave thread that I AM working on it still, and that it
should be done by the end of Feb.
SympleSymon at 6:10PM, March 12, 2014
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So yeeeeaah, so much for THAT deadline, lol. But I'm writing it up right now, and fully intend to finish it before bed, or within the next 24hrs!

Dave
Retake - What happens when a movie star goes from portraying a hero on the silverscreen to becoming one in real-life? Nothing good…

http://www.drunkduck.com/Retake
ironhand at 2:59AM, March 13, 2014
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This'd be a cool opener to Season 2.
Stop looking at my signature and read my comics!!
Abt_Nihil at 6:05AM, March 13, 2014
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ironhand wrote:
This'd be a cool opener to Season 2.
I think so too!

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