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Lacerated Veil
harkovast at 6:34PM, Sept. 17, 2009
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I didn't like it that much, Kev liked it more, we both hated the Spanish after a while and we both loves the art.
But what did YOU think?
(Hmmm, that went a bit Captain Planet and the Planeteers at the end there…)
The power is YOOOUUUURRS!

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harkovast at 4:53AM, Sept. 18, 2009
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Oh and the pun was something like “I didn't like Lacerated Veil, but I am not too CUT UP about it.”
Now don't you feel richer for learning that?

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Bocaj at 6:23AM, Sept. 18, 2009
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I stared reading it around the time it was featured, if i remember correctly…
At first I loved the strip for its originality! I couldn't get enough of it, but after awhile, it became just like any other strip I read to me (so still good, but no longer as new and exciting). It is interesting because I feel like LV is so unique, but may be getting old. It may be helped if the author tried an ongoing story line. That way, even if the story didn't make sense, it would be something you could follow through the absurdity.
Also, about the Spanish; I took Spanish for four years, and although I'm not anymore, I can understand 80% of it, and for me is kinda fun to see what I remember (but that is mainly me, I guess).

Don't read Rape.
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ifelldownthestairs at 6:30AM, Sept. 18, 2009
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Yeah, it's very much riding on its qualities rather than attempting to expand, and clinging to the Spanish is the worst offender. Other than that I liked it quite a bit.

Jesus Hark, why not add a “The power is YOOURRSS!!!” for good measure?

….no, seriously. We would look so super bad ass.

B)B)<————that's us.
you know why birds don't write their memoirs? because birds don't lead epic lives, that's why. who'd want to read what a bird does? nobody. that's who.
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harkovast at 11:20AM, Sept. 18, 2009
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Okay, I will go and edit it to make us more bad ass!
I want cool sunglasses!

This comic does need to try something knew,I agree with Bocaj.
The elements of “Guy speaks nonsense Spanish….guy shoots self in the head” formula are getting very tired.


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