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A few hours
Genejoke at 1:31AM, Oct. 19, 2010
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A few hours.

Jabberwockyjones first malefic tale and the first entry for malefic in any capacity not by myself. I really like it as it does everything I had hoped to get from malefic tales right off the bat.

The art is by me, in my opinion it is hit and miss but some pages I am still very happy with.

My opinion
Writing
Being a short story there isn't a lot of character, it is mostly showing a glimpse of the hell wrought destruction, and that is does superbly.
10/10

Art
The line art is mostly pretty solid but the colouring is a very mixed as I was trying out different techniques and some worked better than others. There are a couple of pages I have a desire to redo colour some day.
6/10
last edited on July 18, 2011 10:14AM

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