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Rats352 on Jan. 7, 2007
at 6:15AM, Jan. 12, 2007
interesting... I'll give it a 4. Text boxes could use a little work but other then that it is good.
at 5:07AM, Jan. 12, 2007
I don't care about the sprite pages. No spriter in their right mind says "I made this myself".
However, you will need to get rid of the other pages of professionally drawn art that you clearly did not do.
I'll give you 48 hours to comply. If you haven't after that time, I'll have to shut down your comic.
Thanks in advance.
at 12:52PM, Jan. 10, 2007
Looks rather sucky to be honest. Poor spelling and the text overlaps the faces. Also that sprite looks poorly cut. But then again it does look like it could get interesting storywise..but i could be wrong ^_^
at 10:29AM, Jan. 10, 2007
It's a good comic but I'll make mention of a few things. If someone is talking and you want them to read that first, instead of putting numbers up put it at the top left of the box. It's natural for people to read top left to bottom right in boxes.
at 7:39AM, Jan. 10, 2007
Yeah, muting me's really going to shut me up. Everyone's saying the same thing and I was just trying to help. -_-
at 2:22PM, Jan. 9, 2007
at 1:10PM, Jan. 9, 2007
ummm pretty good, but the spelling should be fixed like magnus said. the story plot is getting very interesting.
at 12:38PM, Jan. 9, 2007
at 10:56AM, Jan. 9, 2007
How old are you anyway?
Hear is picking up sound with your EARS.
HERE is being in a place.
Whn you're putting two words together like LET US you put a ' where the missing letter is so it comes out like LET'S.
at 7:51PM, Jan. 8, 2007
at 7:29PM, Jan. 8, 2007
Why is Sora shouting? lol.
Nice start, just work on the spelling. "pasunt" should be "patient", am I right? Use "here" instead of "hear". It's a miniscule error that many people make, but it gets annoying.
Otherwise, the joke is funny. Good job.