Page 1
cheesen8or on June 21, 2010
here's page one.
this is our main character, and with a new sprite… comes a new name! this is Lewis… creative, huh?
i have holidays starting friday, so i'll be able to get a heap of pages out.
cheers
pokemon rivalry
cheesen8or at 10:41PM, June 22, 2010
@slipknot, niether, it will be different, but it will work, although i might have aa tourney in it later. @ nova pirate, the bubble covers him up, he's still there @vegito, is the blue THAT dark? thats wierd, i used the pallette from the other sprites but made it darker, heh
xVegitox at 6:02PM, June 22, 2010
NICE PAGE FIFTY ON- Ahh I see... a restart hmm. We'll once again I'll have to wait and see how this plays out right? :D I like the new sprite its a huge improvement, but I'm not liking that blinding shade of blue on it. Maybe make it a tad darker? Anyways I hope you have things down this time.
zt2maniac at 3:47PM, June 22, 2010
neh
novapirate at 2:29PM, June 22, 2010
Ahh! Where did Growlithe go in the last panel..?! otherwise, lookin' good!
slipknot6SIC6 at 9:28AM, June 22, 2010
YES!!! New sprite ACTUALLY looks like he's wearing a hood! It looks really great, the last sprite made him look like he was wearing a blue turban or something. Anyways, are you still going to have the whole boat tourney, or are you going to do the whole badge scheme?
cheesen8or at 4:11AM, June 22, 2010
kinda, it will be a bit different
Mepple at 3:29AM, June 22, 2010
i think the sprite looks better than last time, are you using same story as last time?
cheesen8or at 1:13AM, June 22, 2010
i started making pages yesterday, and i made 3, seeing as how i only realised NOW how to make all the speech bubble effects as one style.
charliemew2 at 12:06AM, June 22, 2010
U suld doo 2 or 3 pages a day. hay how about i make u a gust comic sinc kevin doesnt need 1. ROFL text talk. Like the page
cheesen8or at 11:53PM, June 21, 2010
i didn't make the house, i just used the one from new bark town, lol
Zoom the Hedgehog at 11:46PM, June 21, 2010
You shouldn't have put the second T.V. right next to the drawer downstairs. It's set up the exact same way as upstairs and is a bit confusing/repetitive. Anyways, good first page. Also, lol "Lewis."
shadowbro at 11:38PM, June 21, 2010
good 1st page it would be awesome if jake and lewis had a battle