thats Pokemon Shroom version Page 17, and like i said PQ me and say if it was funny, you know, on 1 to 5 scale, like the comics... please? (does the big puppy dog eyes)
well, yea i think so too, kind of. -_- ... BUT DON'T GIVE UP!!!
and yes some might put you down, and you made HUGE mistakes, so what? ALL OF HAVE in life!! so the TASC might shut you down, so what, read your comic and the comments, and fix them and re-post them!!! and with that i must leave, GO RUBY! bye i hope you think about what, i said... fairwell (starts to fly off to the sunset) we shall meet again, i was thinking of doing my own comic or fanficion, but i don't know... i have so much to think about my own future... it might be too late for me...
-_- (tears falling,(but don't know how to do that) ...BUT NOT FOR YOU!!!... GO FOR YOUR DREAMS!!! (now out of sight)
kid, (and i rarely address people that way)just because you slap a bunch of pokemon sprites together with ms paint with no effort at all, doesnt mean your comics interesting in any way.
What in the world happened here? There is way too much grey, the text bubbles are very pixelated, and the images are static and small. This isn't a video game, so stop treating it like one. It's a comic, so make a comic.
the spelling is getting better at least And im glad your capitalizing, the plots fine but you need to get the moves correct as Charmander starts out with scratch. it's an tiny matter but you forgot to capatalize Geodude's
name in the bubble above the third
panel but no biggie.
[quote]i will do it my way and u will like it it our just read thsi comic[/quote]
Sigh.. I wish you hadn't of said that... >.> I'm reporting this to TASC. Appearantly SCP can't help you..
You just dug your own grave.
..You realize Charmander's can't learn tackle, right? But... Either way.. Normal attacks have no effect on Rock types.. Even it it critical-ed, it'd still be like only 5 points... And... Rock Throw would of killed Char, he's weak against Rock type pokes.
They're standing still! no motion at all. The difference between a comic and a game is that a game moves, in wich case it soesn't matter. This sir is a comic. It doesn't move uinless its an animated gif or flash or something like that.
I cannot spot a single piece of effort her *points at onix' level* *also points at bad dialogue's* *points also at bad effects*
sbnt at 11:52PM, Nov. 23, 2009
got 2 do better
BEEP BEEP IM A JEEP at 7:40PM, May 12, 2008
thats Pokemon Shroom version Page 17, and like i said PQ me and say if it was funny, you know, on 1 to 5 scale, like the comics... please? (does the big puppy dog eyes)
BEEP BEEP IM A JEEP at 7:32PM, May 12, 2008
oh hey eveybody: pokemon shroom comic: page 17. and PQ me!!!
BEEP BEEP IM A JEEP at 7:25PM, May 12, 2008
well, yea i think so too, kind of. -_- ... BUT DON'T GIVE UP!!! and yes some might put you down, and you made HUGE mistakes, so what? ALL OF HAVE in life!! so the TASC might shut you down, so what, read your comic and the comments, and fix them and re-post them!!! and with that i must leave, GO RUBY! bye i hope you think about what, i said... fairwell (starts to fly off to the sunset) we shall meet again, i was thinking of doing my own comic or fanficion, but i don't know... i have so much to think about my own future... it might be too late for me... -_- (tears falling,(but don't know how to do that) ...BUT NOT FOR YOU!!!... GO FOR YOUR DREAMS!!! (now out of sight)
sessy6 at 11:45AM, Jan. 28, 2007
delete this shit..
sessy6 at 9:31AM, Jan. 27, 2007
...you suck...what the hell man...ooh look at me...i can put some sprites on ms pain...im so clever...what the hell...god...
speedingbullet at 9:00PM, Sept. 22, 2006
kid, (and i rarely address people that way)just because you slap a bunch of pokemon sprites together with ms paint with no effort at all, doesnt mean your comics interesting in any way.
lefarce at 4:27PM, Sept. 22, 2006
What in the world happened here? There is way too much grey, the text bubbles are very pixelated, and the images are static and small. This isn't a video game, so stop treating it like one. It's a comic, so make a comic.
Erk at 3:29PM, Sept. 22, 2006
the spelling is getting better at least And im glad your capitalizing, the plots fine but you need to get the moves correct as Charmander starts out with scratch. it's an tiny matter but you forgot to capatalize Geodude's name in the bubble above the third panel but no biggie.
Rich at 3:18PM, Sept. 22, 2006
Ah, so this is the comic that was reported to us? We'll make sure you get ALL the attention you need...
KevinClifford at 2:25PM, Sept. 22, 2006
[quote]i will do it my way and u will like it it our just read thsi comic[/quote] Sigh.. I wish you hadn't of said that... >.> I'm reporting this to TASC. Appearantly SCP can't help you.. You just dug your own grave.
KevinClifford at 2:22PM, Sept. 22, 2006
..You realize Charmander's can't learn tackle, right? But... Either way.. Normal attacks have no effect on Rock types.. Even it it critical-ed, it'd still be like only 5 points... And... Rock Throw would of killed Char, he's weak against Rock type pokes.
jef dam5 at 2:10PM, Sept. 22, 2006
They're standing still! no motion at all. The difference between a comic and a game is that a game moves, in wich case it soesn't matter. This sir is a comic. It doesn't move uinless its an animated gif or flash or something like that. I cannot spot a single piece of effort her *points at onix' level* *also points at bad dialogue's* *points also at bad effects*
soniccomicwriter at 1:35PM, Sept. 22, 2006
onix is ment to be a level ten