ok 1st of all, why is there so much white space, there should be none, it takes up most of the screen. 2nd, dont save in jpeg, save in png. 3rdly the text is kinda hard to read and some of the textboxes you make big, and they only have like 2 words in it. I'll keep my eye on this comic to see if it gets better. Good try though
zeldario at 2:05PM, Aug. 3, 2006
yeah sorry this is really my first try at comics so it isnt really great i admit
theduckofanime at 10:37AM, Aug. 2, 2006
much agreein with Doklor, and to add your bubbles are going through the characters. It looks pretty bad when you do that.
Doklor567 at 9:14AM, Aug. 2, 2006
ok 1st of all, why is there so much white space, there should be none, it takes up most of the screen. 2nd, dont save in jpeg, save in png. 3rdly the text is kinda hard to read and some of the textboxes you make big, and they only have like 2 words in it. I'll keep my eye on this comic to see if it gets better. Good try though