A Deadly Awakening Ch.1 Page 6
GameGirlAS9990 on June 26, 2019
I am sorry about the lack of updates for this but I am not dead that is for one. With high school out of the way, hopefully I can upload more of this comic. Maybe college might be a little forgiving I don't know. I have been working on the next pages so don't fret okay.
awsome owl 98 at 12:28PM, June 26, 2019
I really like your art style but I find the text a little bit difficult to read. I get you're probably trying to make it look unique to the lettering of other comics but perhaps you could just make all of the lettering more similar to that of the last panel of this page. "WHOSE THE ONE WHO LOST SIGHT OF" is easy to read because the letters are more uniform in size and less close together to one another. Also you might jut want to make all of the text in capitol letters. It's something a lot of comics do to make it clearer to read. Great job on this comic so far though! It seems intriguing.