# 8 First Sight
Shiori Tsumi on Feb. 16, 2007
And so Kazi FINALLY sees Sarik. Poor Sarik, he seems a little smitten, don't he? It'll wear off once Kazi actually enters the picture. And if you're wondering about the ‘hating men’ bit, that's something that has an actual trigger. A trigger which will not be explained until Karen and Kali have toyed about with their new roles as villains a bit more. And in case you couldn't tell, this page happens while Koichi has his dramatic, vital-to-the-storyline chat with Karen and Kali. Which I'm not letting you see. Nyah. >XP
Oh, and by the way….about this comic. I was experimenting with drawing the comic myself and doing the text in photoshop. If you can't read anything, tell me. Also, you are not imagining things. Shi-chan just did a four page update. Yes, she did. Pinch yourself and stare at the screen if you don't believe me. It'll still be here.
Nigellashade at 10:19AM, Feb. 21, 2007
I wonder what's yet to come of her being there, especially being around him. At least she's seeing the sights, and questioning her surroundings.. ^^ Glad you have kept up updating Shiori Tsumi, hope to see more of your story. Take care, & Lot's of ~Hugs~ ~M~ v~~~~v
DJLink at 1:16PM, Feb. 20, 2007
meh
Kazuo at 6:50PM, Feb. 18, 2007
So... four pages. Nice. But... the text is kinda hard to read. It seems... tall? Might want to try a wider serif font. FYI, serifs are those little tail things. And serif fonts... well, they have them. Or you just might want to increase the kerning. That might also help. (kerning is one of those options you get for text... just experiment with that and leading.)
vie4 at 9:17PM, Feb. 17, 2007
nice