Ah, a bird's-eye view was a great choice for a dramatic scene. I like the way you keep the wind, the fire and the snow spreading direction to the one direction. It helped with the rhythm of the lines :) ozoneocean mentioned the solid black. I think you should keep it if you wish, but using a smoother transition is between the colors and the solid black, respecting your art style (two options come to my mind: 1-adding little shadows, building the transition area until the solid black. 2-(the easier choice) painting with darker color until it blends to the solid black). But the solid black itself? I think you should keep it, it's a beautiful layout.
Great work on the areal view, the soldier's expressions and the banagde sequence! Very effective! The stark lighting is good but the fire could need work... Needing less black, more softness and a glow on the nearby buildings (but done perfectly on the machine gunner!). As it is though it reminds me of the work of El Greco, or some of the early mediaeval painters. The MG34 needs some work, the shape is stylised and that's ok but the perspective is reversed.
So many modern battles have been decided by one determined man with a machine gun. He'll get the Iron Cross for sure. It will be a great victory for Germany and his widow will receive a lifetime pension.
AmeliaP at 7:35AM, Dec. 17, 2018
Ah, a bird's-eye view was a great choice for a dramatic scene. I like the way you keep the wind, the fire and the snow spreading direction to the one direction. It helped with the rhythm of the lines :) ozoneocean mentioned the solid black. I think you should keep it if you wish, but using a smoother transition is between the colors and the solid black, respecting your art style (two options come to my mind: 1-adding little shadows, building the transition area until the solid black. 2-(the easier choice) painting with darker color until it blends to the solid black). But the solid black itself? I think you should keep it, it's a beautiful layout.
Tantz_Aerine at 10:59AM, Dec. 17, 2018
Thank you! I'll take it all into account for the next page!
Ozoneocean at 5:12PM, Nov. 21, 2018
Great work on the areal view, the soldier's expressions and the banagde sequence! Very effective! The stark lighting is good but the fire could need work... Needing less black, more softness and a glow on the nearby buildings (but done perfectly on the machine gunner!). As it is though it reminds me of the work of El Greco, or some of the early mediaeval painters. The MG34 needs some work, the shape is stylised and that's ok but the perspective is reversed.
Ozoneocean at 10:49PM, Nov. 21, 2018
:P
PIT_FACE at 6:46PM, Nov. 21, 2018
Your FACE needs work.
bravo1102 at 2:13AM, Nov. 20, 2018
So many modern battles have been decided by one determined man with a machine gun. He'll get the Iron Cross for sure. It will be a great victory for Germany and his widow will receive a lifetime pension.
Tantz_Aerine at 4:56AM, Nov. 20, 2018
Very likely.