Chapter 00 - Page 01
The Uke Reformation on March 6, 2006
The hand was - and still is - the only thing on this page that makes me happy about this page. The butterfly looks like crap, and I readily admit it. But whatever…the coloringjob makes it look someway decent. Maybe.
glimmer at 7:50PM, March 9, 2006
ohh interesting XD
The Uke Reformation at 6:31AM, March 9, 2006
That's true! -looks it over- Aaa! You're a lifesaver! -is playing with own hand- You're right, you're right - the pinky comes up way further than that...I'd never noticed. The robe is actually just there for the design on it, but you're definitely right. In the original, the one UNALTERED by a computer, there are wrinkles that show as such, but in this one, they've been overrun with color. Gaa! Thankyou so much!! -bows deep-
anonymous at 7:32PM, March 8, 2006
The pinky is too short, it makes the hand look slighly distorted. and if the arm is slightly angled up the robe should be falling towards the right side and not the left, even if you want to show a bit of motion. Aside from that everything looks ok.