Hi chica, I can see that you weren't thrilled with this page. I hope that you can clean it up and make it work for you. I still like it... it's got some passion in it that is necessary to the story line.
Looking forward to more of course!
Take care and talk to you soon!
Awe, big brother protection is such a sweet thing. I'm looking forward to your final draft of this page. The last panel is a really cool effect, so emotional and serious.
Stig Hemmer at 5:57PM, Feb. 18, 2008
BLARGH? I don't see any BLARGH.
Peipei at 12:21AM, Nov. 3, 2007
This page is so sweet :3
Darwin at 2:33AM, Nov. 2, 2007
Hi chica, I can see that you weren't thrilled with this page. I hope that you can clean it up and make it work for you. I still like it... it's got some passion in it that is necessary to the story line. Looking forward to more of course! Take care and talk to you soon!
usedbooks at 10:13PM, Nov. 1, 2007
Awe, big brother protection is such a sweet thing. I'm looking forward to your final draft of this page. The last panel is a really cool effect, so emotional and serious.