Chapter 1-Page 13
soonmme on Dec. 4, 2010
Yaaay, right?
Anyway, I deleted the last 3 pages(so, what was 13, 14, and 15), I'm gonna try to make this comic ‘visually stunning’ which may or may not have succeeded in this page. Anyway, I'm hoping to finish the chapter in a page or two, then starts the real cool stuff.
While FTO Is my srs comic, I have a comedy comic, too, it's less silly than apcwalt was, even :o
Anyway, this is back, totally!
(By the way, I've edited a few pages for a few things, so you may want to refresh your mind on the archive, old viewers)
coraz5000 at 7:27PM, Dec. 5, 2010
:D
soonmme at 2:13PM, Dec. 5, 2010
Indeed arc, the sun is setting, around panel 3 the last bit of the sun would have gone into the horizon, which is why it was finally dark at the 4th panel. I too feel that the 1st panel is a little over done, I have to figure out how to do these effects perfectly(I've been doing a lot of photo based art, and I'm trying to implement some of the same tricks to this)
locoroco1 at 11:54AM, Dec. 5, 2010
Looks her childhood was terrible.
Arc at 5:25AM, Dec. 5, 2010
The first panel looks a bit effect whored, the sand is practically glowing... But the effect for the second panel is quite nice. Is the sun setting in this scene? Because the effect seems to change much more draastically between each panel. You should've had it be about sunset for a couple of strips if you could've. :) And I can't imagine a slammed door echoing either, so that was a bit unnecessary. But everything else was great. You also seem to be excellent at free panelling. You should do it for all your comics, it makes the page look interesting.
soonmme at 10:56PM, Dec. 4, 2010
Totally.
charliemew2 at 10:52PM, Dec. 4, 2010
Let me rephrase it then. HOLY SHIT THIS COMIC ISN'T DEAD. That better? :P
soonmme at 10:50PM, Dec. 4, 2010
I've been making Pokémon Red Except, Not Really... for +2weeks now, charlie, lol.
charliemew2 at 10:48PM, Dec. 4, 2010
HOLY SHIT UR BACK.
zt2maniac at 10:44PM, Dec. 4, 2010
Wooooooo finally@