thanks JNP...Midge: as JNP explained the cop walks up the the side of the car and as he talks to the purse snatcher the shadow of the main character can be see just before he hits the car full force!
Midge: I believe the cop is seeing the hero's shadow as he's about to lay into the car.
I'll be looking forward to your updates. Enjoying the start of this immensely.
hey thanks for your comment guys. Eddie : I do these at work when I have nothing to do. So sometimes i get lots of time to do a page and sometimes I don't. I do experiment but majority of the pages that are varied are due to laziness :D I haven't really invested much emotion into this comic apart from the story. (It was a screenplay I wrote when i was younger)
Amazing page!! This comic is super,the art is stunning and the story and pace are perfect!
*faved*
P.s I like both the lines, and the colouring, and think both are perfect and suit the style. >.>
very cool art and a very cool story so far however I think some more line variation would really boost the art up a peg everything seems to be the exact same thickness now and thats always been a pet peeve of mine :P Also the amount of color and detail you put in things kind of varies which seems a bit odd are you experimenting or did you just get lazy? not meaning to sound rude here I'm just curious as the artwork is so good in general
Chameleon Kid at 1:27AM, March 17, 2009
Sah-WEET explosion!!!! *w00t* *,* (it blows my mind.)
tokuku at 4:33PM, Feb. 27, 2009
cheers
Tedmund at 2:37PM, Feb. 27, 2009
pwned! faving this~
tokuku at 7:52PM, Feb. 22, 2009
thanks JNP...Midge: as JNP explained the cop walks up the the side of the car and as he talks to the purse snatcher the shadow of the main character can be see just before he hits the car full force!
JustNoPoint at 7:23PM, Feb. 22, 2009
Midge: I believe the cop is seeing the hero's shadow as he's about to lay into the car. I'll be looking forward to your updates. Enjoying the start of this immensely.
TheMidge28 at 6:51PM, Feb. 22, 2009
the explosion in the last panel rocks. In comparison to the rest of the page it looks to good. I don;t follow what happened in the 3 middle panels.
tokuku at 6:36PM, Feb. 22, 2009
Yeh, that stuff i actually tried to do well ...although i don't spend more than a day on that stuff..i get bored haha
Eddie Jensen at 6:20PM, Feb. 22, 2009
ah okay cool then I was just wondering because the quality of your art in your post on the forum was even higher than this which made me curious hehe.
tokuku at 6:07PM, Feb. 22, 2009
hey thanks for your comment guys. Eddie : I do these at work when I have nothing to do. So sometimes i get lots of time to do a page and sometimes I don't. I do experiment but majority of the pages that are varied are due to laziness :D I haven't really invested much emotion into this comic apart from the story. (It was a screenplay I wrote when i was younger)
Hugo Maximo at 6:06PM, Feb. 22, 2009
Cool!!!
Emily Elizabeth at 5:36PM, Feb. 22, 2009
Amazing page!! This comic is super,the art is stunning and the story and pace are perfect! *faved* P.s I like both the lines, and the colouring, and think both are perfect and suit the style. >.>
Eddie Jensen at 5:21PM, Feb. 22, 2009
very cool art and a very cool story so far however I think some more line variation would really boost the art up a peg everything seems to be the exact same thickness now and thats always been a pet peeve of mine :P Also the amount of color and detail you put in things kind of varies which seems a bit odd are you experimenting or did you just get lazy? not meaning to sound rude here I'm just curious as the artwork is so good in general