Second? So sooooon?
alecisonfire on Oct. 12, 2007
This is so true.
Another note though.
This was actually submitted the same day as the first. But I dated it as the day after so that people don't expect too much of me. Except now I've told everyone which defeats the object, but then again maybe not EVERYONE reads these little authors notes.
Hmm I wonder if html works in these posts. That would be interesting.
Rusty Knight at 8:33AM, Nov. 30, 2007
I would like to give MartialBliss the award for the largest non-flame post evar. and I can't understand why people just can't call it purple.
maritalbliss at 5:21PM, Oct. 14, 2007
Well, since you asked for it. The layout: The boxes bother me. If the first three were the same size with the punchline a bit bigger, I think it'd work better. As it is, they look halfassed. The Art: Are you just drawin' this in paint or what and if so...use the premade shape tools, just because you are a stick person doesn't mean you shouldn't look your best. The light switch looks pretty good. The Writing: Watch punctuation, it may seem nitpicky, but it makes me not read a comic faster than you can spit, you try--but, I'm SUPER anal about it. I see the joke you are tryin' and I think it falls a bit short, could be it's just not my style...I'm quite the snob. Response to Author's Notes: You can't use html as far as I know, but you can use that bulletin coding. Rating: Normally, I wouldn't even leave a comment. According to your PQ you didn't think I noticed you updated...No honey, I did notice. But, momma taught me if you can't say something nice...you know the drill. But, since you did put forth the effort to PQ me, I figured I'd leave you one more comment and since you seem like you really want both positive and negative feedback...I'm only giving you 4 this time, since although somewhat improved...I think you could do better. Then again...I don't know you from Eve, maybe you can't. Good luck with the comic. I really hope you have fun with it and remember...these comments aren't really important...as long as you like it...that's what matters.
Rutger at 11:49AM, Oct. 13, 2007
I read the posts. Hell, I write a lot in my posts, I might as well read the stuff other people say. I haven't tried myself, but I've seen links in the commentary bits, so html might be an option.