Chapter 1
Solar13lade on Aug. 16, 2006
Yeah! The first one. The comic strips are pretty big, so we cover more,but this is the first one, so its not too big. Space Yoshi X is the co-author, so he'll probally make better comics then I will.
Solar13lade on Aug. 16, 2006
Yeah! The first one. The comic strips are pretty big, so we cover more,but this is the first one, so its not too big. Space Yoshi X is the co-author, so he'll probally make better comics then I will.
DarkDon211 at 6:39PM, Aug. 19, 2006
Too big, too pointless. Good luck with the next ones, not all comics start awesome.
Nintendude at 6:33PM, Aug. 19, 2006
I got nothing to say, you get a 4.
Litis at 11:33PM, Aug. 17, 2006
Yes, the first eight panels were good and the other eight panels were empty.
Solar13lade at 8:06PM, Aug. 17, 2006
Well, I'm not too good, but I think its a start, as it shows what Kirby is like. And the comic strips are suppose to be long, but I kinda ran out of ideas... Space Yoshi X will probally make a longer one as thats what we're going for. I'll take joke suggestions though. Though I agree with you. I knew somehing seemed off, just couldn't place it.
SketchMan3 at 7:56PM, Aug. 17, 2006
Hmmm....It's a bit empty, and it's kind of hard to tell what's going on..The " I think I saw something. Nah."stuff was a bit awkwardly executed. The first four panels were the best. Should've left it at that. The top row gets a rating of 4. Overall rating. 3.