*ahem*
tl;dr Fix the layout of the comic, think out your jokes better (an easy way to do that is to browse the good comics of Drunkduck, sprite comics or not, and see how their humor works and what people enjoy), use custom sprites if you can't make your own, if no sprites exist for the character (i.e. Pyramid Head) either go to a spriting site that takes request, or write out the character. It's better to do that than have a horrible sprite. Use sprite styles that closely match each other (color wise, like 8-bit and 32-bit on the same page looks bad.) instead of the first sprites you find, or like (i.e. using Sonic Advance style instead of the Genesis sprites) usually you can tell what bittage his what by the system it's on. Fix your typos, they're are 10000 on the Internet. Seriously. Learn the difference between your (as in you own it, as in your comic) and you're (you are. like You're making a pretty bad comic.) Lose the Meme jokes (mankind ill needs a Savior like you etc) use backgrounds more, mainly in the fighting scenes. Also give credit where credit is due.
There. I tried to be less of an asshole and give actually crit. If you remove this one as well, you're just not willing to listen to reason.
Just in-case you missed it.
Rags at 7:40PM, Dec. 1, 2009
@Glandis- I apologize then.
Rags at 7:40PM, Dec. 1, 2009
so what you're saying is you're going to suck and keep on sucking despite any crit you get. Yeah that doesn't make sense at all.
Glandis at 12:36PM, Dec. 1, 2009
@Rags I did'nt Remove you last one
zealotjohn at 9:19AM, Dec. 1, 2009
well ive seen several comics do the same mistakes that he has, but in the end it just ended up just fine
Rags at 12:49AM, Dec. 1, 2009
*ahem* tl;dr Fix the layout of the comic, think out your jokes better (an easy way to do that is to browse the good comics of Drunkduck, sprite comics or not, and see how their humor works and what people enjoy), use custom sprites if you can't make your own, if no sprites exist for the character (i.e. Pyramid Head) either go to a spriting site that takes request, or write out the character. It's better to do that than have a horrible sprite. Use sprite styles that closely match each other (color wise, like 8-bit and 32-bit on the same page looks bad.) instead of the first sprites you find, or like (i.e. using Sonic Advance style instead of the Genesis sprites) usually you can tell what bittage his what by the system it's on. Fix your typos, they're are 10000 on the Internet. Seriously. Learn the difference between your (as in you own it, as in your comic) and you're (you are. like You're making a pretty bad comic.) Lose the Meme jokes (mankind ill needs a Savior like you etc) use backgrounds more, mainly in the fighting scenes. Also give credit where credit is due. There. I tried to be less of an asshole and give actually crit. If you remove this one as well, you're just not willing to listen to reason. Just in-case you missed it.
Jonko at 11:36PM, Nov. 30, 2009
ouch? That's why hammers suck!