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TheTanman on April 26, 2014
READ ME PLOX This is the first time I've made a real comic. Please give tips links tricks whatever you wanna say just go ahead and comment. Give honset opinions because I know its sloppy and messy. And the art does get better, I'm really trying to improve. I've made 5 pages already I wanna know if anyone could actually stick around with this idea. :D
I uploaded this at like 836x1200 on JPEG are those good? is it too big?
All i have is a mechanical pencil and photoshop. For right now at least, someone should hook it up with the awesome art pencils stores links and stuff and what not links, stores. Cause I don't know anything about that. I would google but just shut your mouth tryhna get some opinion.
Call Me Tom at 1:11AM, April 27, 2014
Apart from what Genejoke said, I'd make sure the panels are in line with each other as that helps tell the reader what order there meant to be read in.
Genejoke at 11:52PM, April 26, 2014
Art wise, sure there is room for improvement but you are off to a good start. Size is fine, I use PNG rather than jog but either is fine really. For the speech bubbles I would suggest checking out some tutorials on youtube for doing them in photoshop. I would also suggest typing the text up in word and running a spelling and grammar check.