Page 11 (Tripped)
blueyes on Dec. 25, 2007
LOL That has to be the most unconvincing trip I've ever done!!! Oh well, you get the gist of it right? Hopefully! Yeah, Jessica is a brat.
blueyes on Dec. 25, 2007
LOL That has to be the most unconvincing trip I've ever done!!! Oh well, you get the gist of it right? Hopefully! Yeah, Jessica is a brat.
curlpop at 10:14AM, Dec. 27, 2007
Great art! Love the story so far!
theorah at 2:58AM, Dec. 27, 2007
oooh! horrible, we girls can be so horrible :P You shouldnt change the page, and I of course dont know if you invite advice or not, but with an action like that, it might of been more effective if you had done it a different angle, one where the girl is falling towards us, and you can see the other sneaky girls behind her as she falls. =3 Still, a nice page anyway, your drawing style is lovely!
Callister at 7:57PM, Dec. 26, 2007
I really like your style, very nice!
taradaga at 7:09PM, Dec. 26, 2007
Just found this comic - I am so fascinated by the plot! Keep up the good work.