Arrival.
TarRawr on May 4, 2007
Yay, second page. I'm not sure what's wrong with her hand in the second panel. She's got E.T. fingers going on.
Suggestions/Crit./Comments appreciated. ^^.
Lost and Found
TarRawr on May 4, 2007
Yay, second page. I'm not sure what's wrong with her hand in the second panel. She's got E.T. fingers going on.
Suggestions/Crit./Comments appreciated. ^^.
Luminous at 7:27PM, May 13, 2007
Maaan, you started putting pages up without telling me. O: Anyway, I've already mentioned my thoughts on this on MSN... So... useless comment, hooray! Also, I think I said this, but her overalls are awesome.
Allan at 11:23PM, May 8, 2007
I suggest working on yoru hands a bit. Don't try to overdo them with detail, not all hands in comics have to have fingernails in black lines. Her head's a little funny in that second panel, but in the next one it looks fine, so good one, there. Anyway, work on those, and I'll try and come up with more things to work on as the pages on go.