Ending to issue one
fredc863 on Sept. 7, 2009
Sadly this is as far as ive come but don't worrie there will be more. If you enjoyed this issue, and would like more please message me at Myspace.com with your own personal opinions. My email adress is FredC863@yahoo.com than you so much and stay tuned!
mattboy115 at 8:42AM, Dec. 17, 2009
I believe I can help you if you look at my GIMP tutorials on youtube. My channel is mattboy115.
sasha the hedgehog at 8:25AM, Dec. 10, 2009
I agree, but other than that, the story line is a little confusing. First its sonic then mario then back to sonic.
Mega Greg at 5:03PM, Sept. 8, 2009
You need A LOT of work on this dude. Your spelling needs a lot of work since there's a lot of words that are easy to spell and you misspelled them. I suggest that before you add the text to your comic, try to type it in Microsoft word for spelling errors. I really like it how you make backgrounds, but they're really choppily done. If you're having trouble to find some backgrounds just search around BGHQ.com and probably try to avoid making your own. Speech bubbles are high priority to this. At times I don't know who's saying what and it just gets confusing sometimes. Try to make some speech bubbles. They're also be easier to read other than being read on the background which can be unreadable. You also need to resize the sprite properly other than resizing them with your mouse. Try to resize them by 200 or 300. Anything that ends with 00 for that matter. With all that down and maybe a little more practice then this might as well be a decent, readable sprite comic.