1- Opening Part1
SpeedReemix on June 29, 2007
After my first comic ( CrossOver ), I was had time to think about comic ! I was found that is not so comic. I decided to make a new one but it would be perfect comic, I hope.
Here it goes… Story about Maverick Raids which was Vent and Aile's mother and dad's died. Main story charachter is Speedy. Speedy is a normal soldier from Guardian HQ. While Guardians searching areas they've found that mavericks are going to attack cities. After many humans and reploids dies our charachter pops up and tries to defend city with other soldiers.
NOTE : Please notice me if there's have grammer mistake, I can fix page by that.
Miguel at 12:35PM, July 13, 2007
Second panel, it is "They are all here." Should've been "Here they are!" Spelliing error in second last panel, is "dangereus", should be "dangerous". Last panel, the term "roger" (when not used as a name) is a term only used over communicaters and means "understood". If someone's talking face to face, it's not really used. Your comics get a five for being decent, and it's good that you're trying with the grammer, but relying on the readers to help you after posting the comics... not a good idea.