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MT Issue 34: Page 18

Author_Ninja on May 17, 2010

Y'know.. I wrote it, and this page still makes me sad.

And then it makes me furious because I forgot to save a large size of this as again. Which means I'll have to redo this whole f@#$ing page over again when I eventually do the book. The ONLY consolation is the background isn't complicated. If I was concentrating I could probably do it in an hour or so, but I wasn't paying attention.

Anyway, I was thinking of removing the filler and sketches from this site to streamline the reading process. But I want your feedback.

Also, maybe someone can answer this. What type of American law officer operates all over the country? Is it Federal Marshals or FBI? Marshal sounds cool, but FBI sounds more like what I want. It's for a character investigating strange deaths all across the USA.

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Elkian at 8:49AM, Nov. 2, 2010

*cries at the tininess of her soul*

Naru_NineTailedFox at 8:19PM, May 18, 2010

Looks like most...let's face it, all of the votes are to move the fillers and provide a link to the new location. It makes the most sense. FBI=Federal Bureau of Investigation, i.e., they solve the puzzle and catch the bad guy. Marshals=federal fugitive apprehension, security, special missions, stick to U.S. territories. I want to know what happened to her, and what will happen next!?! What could make a tomboy cry like that?

Author_Ninja at 6:12PM, May 18, 2010

@Chocann: Sugar Gliders are also an exotic pet you can get in America. They sell them in pet shops near here.

scdlbunny2 at 5:37PM, May 18, 2010

i think fbi is what your looking for or maybe you could make up some whole new department for yourself?

chocann at 5:19PM, May 18, 2010

@Auragongal: lol sugar gliders are native to North and eastern Australia (My home) as well as some surrounding areas. So that means that barnes must of been past australia or papu new ginea or indenisa. Author_Ninja: as for the filters it seems like you have a lot of support to keep them, but i am going to contradict them by saying that it would be nice to have just comics in the archives, i like to go through and re-read/ archive diving. i would have to agree with ecchi_kitty, maybe put them onto another host site with an outgoing link on this one so that they can still be appreicated. but thats just me putting my two cents in ^_^

ecchi_kitty at 4:15PM, May 18, 2010

Agree that if do take filler out here, make certain is still around somewhere. Not sure how much codeing would take, but have seen places where have the option of things like 'see next update' or 'see next non-filler update' sort of thing.

Author_Ninja at 3:06PM, May 18, 2010

@Auragongal: Sugar Glider, yes. They aren't native to Japan, but she feels a deep affinity for Otto and has the same needy, self-injuring when sad nature as the Sugies. Originally she was supposed to be a sheep, but since she's only an adopted member of the Kurohitsuji family, it made more sense to make here something different. Plus, Sugies are adorable.

werefox2009 at 1:58PM, May 18, 2010

If you remove the art make sure to have it available to us some where author ninja please? Mookie and weazy forever

Auragongal at 1:10PM, May 18, 2010

Her inner self is the same species as Otto. It's a Sugarjumper correct?

tehwerr at 12:53PM, May 18, 2010

her inner self is a squirrel furry?

Scythe Massakur at 7:33AM, May 18, 2010

Not sure about Marshals. Never spent much time around them.

Scythe Massakur at 7:32AM, May 18, 2010

Acutally, both FBI and CIA have jurisdiction all over the country as long as it is a federal matter. i.e something that is a danger to the US.

Mr Kaos at 7:13AM, May 18, 2010

Such a dark place for the poor soul. No wonder she is so scared. So sad..

manofhouse21 at 4:38AM, May 18, 2010

i can only imageing the look on motormouth face

anonymous at 4:37AM, May 18, 2010

FBI is more easy to write about and if a new charater comes in the story to give it that "here but not really" cover up file from the FBI would be a hell of a lot more intertesting.

Stevarooni at 3:59AM, May 18, 2010

Both marshals and FBI operate across the country. Marshals do work directly for the courts (fugitives, protecting judges and courthouses, etc.) while the FBI investigates crimes. An FBI agent would be more likely to travel.

mylittleworldX3 at 3:32AM, May 18, 2010

both the federal marshals and the FBI work all over the country. so you can pick either! depends on what kind of law enforcement you want. :)

Indybot at 1:21AM, May 18, 2010

D'awwww, this page is kind of sweet. Another option would be to put a link to the next story comic in the author's notes for multi-part filler pages. This would give readers the option of skipping guest comics and the like if they wanted to.

dragonbolt at 12:22AM, May 18, 2010

it would probably be the FBI that you are looking for as the Marshals are more for direct safety of everyone (wether a witness of a prisnor), or you could just go with a standard P.I.. as for the sketches and filler well its really all up to you take it down, leave it up, move it someplace else, just do what you want to.

Mister Michael at 11:24PM, May 17, 2010

I can only agree with DJLink, let it stay, or collect it separately somewhere on the side. Oh yeah, this is my first time commenting, but I've been a loyal reader since maybe five pages from the beginning, AWESOME story you have here AN, really, hat's off to you

DJLink at 10:52PM, May 17, 2010

It may be filler but I kinda enjoy some of the stuff you draw regardeless on wether its rushed or not. I say let the filler stay X3!

Author_Ninja at 10:45PM, May 17, 2010

There's more to it, but yeah, basically.

TheFlyingGreenMonkey at 10:44PM, May 17, 2010

So she is a lost soul? That sucks.