Chapter Two- Page 03
D0m on Nov. 18, 2007
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Poor Nadya… I really like how this page came out. I went ahead and inked this page, so it's probably why the lines have better quality. My brother swore panel two was lame, but I don't think so. :-) To answer your questions, Charna is still alive and will soon be kicking, I'm sure. If anyone's wondering why the moon is out, I'll probably explain in a few pages.
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katyas at 8:02AM, May 11, 2008
Next time bite something a bit more ... important. That might distract him more, you know?
SwinS at 6:07PM, Nov. 22, 2007
I looove the effects around his hand from the brace. You do wonderful things with grayscale.
Mutation at 5:51PM, Nov. 20, 2007
So much for not doing anything rash, that looks like it hurt! Spider shadow! n.n
skyangel at 1:48AM, Nov. 20, 2007
Your art is so powerful sometimes, its amazing!
jmt at 7:00PM, Nov. 19, 2007
the first frame is great! The anger on that guys face is great.
Fitz at 5:10PM, Nov. 19, 2007
His angry face in panel 1 is great! And I like Charna's internal monologue/telepathic conversation - whichever of the two that is. Panel 2 looks good. It's the guy's hand could use a bit more detail or touching up. And maybe you could color blood in red. Anyway, I'm curious what happens next! Sorry I didn't get here earlier, I keep missing my friends' updates!
Fitz at 5:07PM, Nov. 19, 2007
His angry face in panel 1 is great! And I like Charna's internal monologue/telepathic conversation - whichever of the two that is. Panel 2 looks good. It's the guy's hand could use a bit more detail or touching up. And maybe you could color blood in red. Anyway, I'm curious what happens next! Sorry I didn't get here earlier, I keep missing my friends' updates!
ohnn at 3:54PM, Nov. 19, 2007
Ouch! Painful.. D: Bite him HARD!
D0m at 1:57PM, Nov. 19, 2007
I'm sorry, you guys. He actually has bracers that conduct his magical powers. He shot something -out- of his hand...
w1nk at 12:45PM, Nov. 19, 2007
Of course, it's not attached to the elbow. The forearm detached and became a missile. Can't you tell?
patrickdevine at 12:14PM, Nov. 19, 2007
The forearm in the third panel looks strange, like it's not really attached to the elbow. Good otherwise.
LanceDanger at 10:51AM, Nov. 19, 2007
Oh noes! =0
dueeast at 8:13AM, Nov. 19, 2007
And the lesson learned is: next time, don't leave them conscious to do stuff like that. Head butt him, Nadya!! lol!
JustNoPoint at 7:52AM, Nov. 19, 2007
I tend to zap people that bite me as well!
Loud_G at 6:24AM, Nov. 19, 2007
Woo Hoo! More action! Get up Spider lady before Nadya gets beat.
Talekyn at 6:23AM, Nov. 19, 2007
Panel two is fine as a pull-back shot. The page again looks wonderful. Shame Nadya had to take a hit, but Charna's just not ready to help her out ...
MetalLuigi at 4:55AM, Nov. 19, 2007
Great artwork, as always
D0m at 4:34AM, Nov. 19, 2007
BLNT- Thank you! Charna's going to be doing much more, soon. DAJB- We can only hope that she does! Tantz- Everyone seems to be so interested in this bite! Haha :D
Tantz_Aerine at 4:14AM, Nov. 19, 2007
Ouch! Next time she bites, she'd better cut something off XD
harryq at 3:53AM, Nov. 19, 2007
How rude!
Rutger at 2:19AM, Nov. 19, 2007
Yeah, bite him!
DAJB at 11:58PM, Nov. 18, 2007
Ooow! Bite him again, Nadi; bite him again!
blntmaker at 11:10PM, Nov. 18, 2007
This page is quite nice! The disembodied thoughts of shadow lady Charna while this action takes place adds a touch of mystery to what we can and cannot see. It's gettin' good!