"Disappointed" is a strong term. Overall it's pretty darn good, but it HAS been a little weak in places. In particular the vamps seem to go down FAR too easily.
And it's a bit hard to end on the sunrise schtick since Buffy lampooned it so effectively a few years back:
Buffy: There's something you forgot about, too. [throws music stand through window behind Luke, bright light pours in] Sunrise!
Luke: Aaaaaarrrrgh... [sees light is just streetlight] Huh?
Buffy: [driving her stake into Luke's back] It's in about nine hours, moron.
Yeah, seems pretty contrived to me as well. Actually, alot of it has felt contrived. Great idea. Cop out execution. And the art is pretty inconsistent. The warden seems to shed an aweful lot & then mysteriously grow back his hair.
I suspect I'll be a minority, but I'm disappointed in the overall piece.
It surprises me that the warden would lose track of time like that...I'm sure Pax isn't complaining however.
I still think he was planted there on purpose for the sole job of ridding the place of the vampires!
Great job!
Da_Villain_47 at 11:53AM, Nov. 21, 2007
Oh, that sunlight can only mean one thing...
irrevenant at 12:22AM, Sept. 2, 2007
"Disappointed" is a strong term. Overall it's pretty darn good, but it HAS been a little weak in places. In particular the vamps seem to go down FAR too easily. And it's a bit hard to end on the sunrise schtick since Buffy lampooned it so effectively a few years back: Buffy: There's something you forgot about, too. [throws music stand through window behind Luke, bright light pours in] Sunrise! Luke: Aaaaaarrrrgh... [sees light is just streetlight] Huh? Buffy: [driving her stake into Luke's back] It's in about nine hours, moron.
John the guard at 3:51AM, Aug. 31, 2007
i see a spectacular ending to an inventive comic idea. great idea everyone
dragonrider at 4:01PM, Aug. 30, 2007
We knew from the time he came in that he would walk out, however are we sure all the rest of the Vamps inside are gone? Don't see a the end sign here.
dragonrider at 4:00PM, Aug. 30, 2007
We knew from the time he came in that he would walk out, however are we sure all the rest of the Vamps inside are gone? Don't see a the end sign here.
n_y_japlander at 7:30AM, Aug. 30, 2007
I'm glad I read all that I missed, in time to come and read it on today's posting date... But, even warden's answer to people above them!
cs3ink at 5:56AM, Aug. 30, 2007
Yeah, seems pretty contrived to me as well. Actually, alot of it has felt contrived. Great idea. Cop out execution. And the art is pretty inconsistent. The warden seems to shed an aweful lot & then mysteriously grow back his hair. I suspect I'll be a minority, but I'm disappointed in the overall piece.
Darwin at 4:58AM, Aug. 30, 2007
It surprises me that the warden would lose track of time like that...I'm sure Pax isn't complaining however. I still think he was planted there on purpose for the sole job of ridding the place of the vampires! Great job!
Archangel at 4:04AM, Aug. 30, 2007
Convienent timing
der_vossi at 3:36AM, Aug. 30, 2007
haha
Chameleon Kid at 1:38AM, Aug. 30, 2007
Yes, it's over--but not for Paxton! Dusted!
DAJB at 12:22AM, Aug. 30, 2007
Heh - that'll learn him!